| "Naruto Dragon Champion" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: Orgy!!!
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 08:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as always and dude you seriously have to make one big orgy from this make Naruto use his mass shadow clone jutsu to make a hundred copies of himself so they can double penetrate all of those hot babes it will be the biggest most amazing lemon ever I know you can do it you're the lemon master.
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Reviewed By: animefanforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Man great fanfic Perfect update soon don't stop keep posting U are super great writer I rate 10/10 great. update. See ya
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Reviewed By: NaruDevilfan On: August 03, 2009 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fell for this story after the first chapter. I pulled an allnighter to finish to this point. I did want to put forth an idea, you don't have to use it if you don't want to. See I was thinking if Naruto is going to make weapons with dragon steel,which gives the weapon special properties as you've written, that maybe you could pull a page from "Devil May Cry" and have him make some of the Devil Arms. The trick is which ones and who gets them. Since this seems to me a fairly strict Light vs Dark story maybe not Rebellion, Lucifur, or Sparda, as they look pretty demonic, but the rest are solid choices. I'm stumped on who to give the weapons to though so I'll leave that up to your imagination. Like I said you don't have to use my idea, I love this story as is, it's just some food for thought. Please update as often as you're able. GOOD LUCK!
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story i give you the rating of ten out of ten in all the categories
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Title: dammmng
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAN!I THOUGHT WHEN I READ THE TITLE THIS WAS NARUTO ON YUGIOHS CURSED DRAGON,BUT WHEN I FINALLY READ IT,WOW!IM LOVING IT ALL!ESPECIALLY HIS OVERPWNGE AND THE FACT ZABUZA AND KIN AND HAKU ARE LEAF,NOT DEAD,ECT ECT ECT im only annoyed at the fact the lemons are seperate.XD thus a 9 on enjoyment.
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Title: Evem better
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 12:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. I wonder how you'll do this based off the first Naruto movie. Will you be doing others based off the Stone of Gelel and about the Crescent Moon village with Prince Michiru and his son?
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Reviewed By: jj On: January 06, 2009 19:29 EST
Comment/Review:
will you be adding isaribi and/or sasame at some point(preferably both)
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 09:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter update soon.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter truly this is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read this could easily enter the top 50 great job.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 12:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're doing great. I must admit, I wasn't really interested first glance, but now I'm glad I read it. Please continue!!!
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Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was another awesome chapter I've been wondering will there be other dragon champions besides Nnaruto. Also off the topic I see that you're stories have small reviews, however I have an idea if you want to have lots of reviews why don't you createn an account on fanfiction.net believe me your stories will have lost of reviews there because that site has more visitors than this one.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 07:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter I've been wondering are you planning to make a harem with Naruto including the adult kunoichis even if they are a lot older than Naruto however I have nothing against a harem with the younger kunoichis update soon.
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Reviewed By: jj On: October 30, 2008 19:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
to be fair, it's not all Naruto's fault he sucks right now. he was poorly treated and poorly trained, if at all, at the Acadamy. and from what we've seen, not at all by kakashi until sasgay wasn't around for him to train
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Title: OMG! This Is Amazing.
Reviewed By: -inufluffyfan- [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is SO rare to see such a talented literary work in Naruto fanfiction. Your writing is amazing and you really should have more reviews saying how great this story really is. I am amazed at how you portray Naruto and his dynamics as growing up from that lovable goof ball into a lovable hunky semi-goof ball. Please continue to update at this site and share the magic of great literature. Thank you and Please update soon : )
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Title: WOW AWESOME
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow man looks like you have outdone yourself this time this story rocks it kicks ass amazing another great story from you first Vandread ad now this can't wait for the next chapter. Also you hsould check my Naruto stories at fanfiction.net farewell.
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