| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 01:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear that dream of hers at the end kind of worries me...I hope Inuyasha and kagame will be alive and well with their son or daughter in the end. I'd hate to see either of them die. Yeah...I'm a sucker for happy endings. ^_^
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2009 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...what a beautiful update, although if I had been there, I would've talked a little sense into Kagome that unlike Miroku and Sango, she and her mate had plenty of time to start a family. Doing so right after shattering the jewel and still needing to recollect all of its shards certainly wasn't the wisest of decisions. Not on your part! As the author, I think you're brilliant. Kagome and Inuyasha just weren't thinking straight. And what was with that horrible dream? Is her subconscious mind trying to warn her that she's going to die in childbirth or something? Is there an ulterior motive behind why you've decided to get them on more friendly terms with Sesshoumaru? Giving her a complicated pregnancy while still having to search for jewel shards will definitely keep this story interesting, that's for sure, and I'm sure that Kagome will be fine in the end, even if there is a bit more drama to come than either she or Inuyasha would have preferred. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: jen_lyn On: October 15, 2009 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoyed reading your fanfic thus far! I read your author's note from a previous chapter stating that you were barely through half of your outline, and i was wondering if you would consider splitting the rest of your story into another fanfic. "Metamorphosis" can stand as its own story alone, and with the ending you have for this chapter, it could be a cliff hanger for your next story. There's nothing wrong with keeping it together, but I know some people lose interest in a story after reading so many chapters. Separating the story was just a thought, so I will keep reading no matter what! I hope to read from you soon! thank you for writing such an original fanfiction
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2009 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME UPDATE!... oh no no sad endings plzz loll this story is too good and this dream at the end is going to be all i can think about until the next update *sigh* lol
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Reviewed By: Sakura-shi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2009 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, noes! Surely not...
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw you are seriously a fantastic writer. I read a chapter of this story a while ago and favorited it so I could read it later becuase I was in the middle of reading another story. Thank GOD i had that quick thinking, instead of just passing this story along. Are you a guy (becuase your sn is KING baka) Lol i don't have any prejudices it's just that It's rare to find a male fanfic writer. Keep up the AWESOME work
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Title: Nice Naraku ass handing
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2009 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO!!! that was a mighty tasty can o whoop ass you just served. It has to be one of the best I've had, satisfying and chunky. I loved this chapter so much, it had me on the edge of my couch the whole read, It even kept me from killing my loud upstairs neighbors. I'll be waiting for the next chapter >_< GREAT JOB!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2009 19:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm glad you're not getting ready to end this story yet, and even more glad that Naraku is finally dead! There are plenty of things you can have happen that won't involve the dark hanyou, so who needs him around? And even though they have to reassemble the jewel again, at least with bad guy numeral uno out of the running, things should go a little more smoothly, right...? (We shall see what we shall see) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 23:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story today and couldn't stop reading! I absolutely adore it and love your takes on how your happy to take pot shots not only at females but males as well and not come across as annoying some of the parts where so funny I almost had several "accidents" ( not a hard thing since I'm 5 months pregnant but still ) I have had my children looking at me like I am insane but my husband has shrugged it off as pregnancy hormones non the less keep up the good work and will be delighted when you add a new chapter , it really is refreshing to see a males take on the fanfics seeing you enjoy so many lovely fics may I suggest "Seven Feudal Fairy Tales " by ladybattousai and "Live and Let Die" parts 1 2 and three by doggieearlover both beautifully written fics as well
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 02:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 18:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. So after the battle is over, will there be an epilogue where we see what became of the Inu-tachi's lives? Or will that be the next part of the story? And obviously, you had Tenseiga be able to revive Kohaku even though in the manga that wasn't possible. Is this because you didn't want to do that whole thing with Kikyo's light? And by the way, I can't remember, is Kikyo still "alive" in this story? Anyway, thanks for updating and I look forward to future chapters. Good luck with everything and I hope you are having a great fall. Sincerely, Zach
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Title: Ouch!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 03:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'er almost as bad as Takahashi-sensei with the huge terrible torturing cliffhangers. Not to mention the gut churning action of this chapter. I feel bruised after reading today, bruised and left dangling cause of the big cliffy, that I new was a cliffy even if it was in the middle of the chapter. I hope next chapter it will be Naraku getting bruised and not us the oh so cute readers! XD
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"And conquer" is my guess. I suppose it could have been worse if Naraku had caught them in the middle of something, it might have made him very jealous though that she would go willingly off with Inuyasha and not give him a look. It was a bit short but if that means the next chapter will come quicker I am all for short. This should be an interesting battle. I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 18:47 PDT
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And Conquer? lol,just my guess.great chapter,but it seemed a little short :(
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 04:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the best line in this one is "Hakudoshi! Go summon Inu- Never mind; he's already here."
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