| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 09:54 PDT
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I usually don't review every chapter, but when I read a particularly good chapter, well - I loved it. Inuyasha watching baseball is such a great image to me lol! (And yes, go Sox - my mom and sister like the Yankees and my Dad and I love the Sox...our household is hellish during baseball season....) The red popsicle bit was cute, and I especially liked the conversation between Inuyasha and Kagome's mom. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 20:04 PDT
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Hope there will be more to the fic. Though I understand work takes away free time, dam the need to pay for things. Finally caught up, after a few long night of reading...worth it though. I think in a Ch. a ways back you mentioned how you wrote about Kagome need to be covered by blankets to sleep. I was suprised you haven't slept with no blankets until I read where you live. Live in the south and it's not that uncommon. I am in Fl and let me tell you, once summer comes there are many times I can't kick the sheets off fast enough and if I could get rid of others items I would. It is actually a very freeing feeling not being under sheets. Keep up the writing when you have time along with the ever funny male traits.
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 23:09 PDT
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Been reading this fic for two nights now and you have had me pulling almost all-nighters. I need to sleep damit. I have to take a what I want to be when I grow up test in the am," although I have two degrees...ugh hate my life. so...I thought I would stop here and say..loving this story. Also I was and still am a TMNT fan and laughed at the name referance. I can't believe I missed a Robot Chicken eppy. and one that featured Inuyasha!!! Now I will be on the hunt for it. I have read a few of your other fics on this and other fanfic sites and you always hook me in, no different this time. I always enjoy your acceptance of how HUGE of a baka you men are. Now to get some sleep so tomorrow night I can hopefully finish reading.
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Title: women
Reviewed By: gaunt On: June 30, 2009 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said you wanted to know a guy who understands women. well i understand them perfectly. Also love the story so far.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea but Viagra is well accepted apparently. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 01:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love when people incorporate demon claiming rules into a story. Everyone has such different ideals about what they would be and how claims are settled. And the fight with Koga had needed to happen for so long. I loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 00:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo well that sucked.... i was so happily reading few chapters each night until i hit the wall..... *sighs* i like growled when i saw i was up to date now... lol but i love this story ^_____^ cant wait to read more =)
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 23:31 PDT
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Lovely, lovely. I loved the many sips of lemonade in this chapter. As I read your wickedly, fun prose--I couldn't help but think of a little lemon-twist to the scenes I just read. There are many stories that have a Youkai Inuyasha having sex with Kagome. How about an out of control, youkai Kagome having her wild way with hanyou Inuyasha? Now that would be different and lots of fun to write! GRIN. Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 22:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
but it was also a trust thing too. And some times a persons trust needs to be tested, that way you know that they can be trusted... (which isn't a really nice thing but it happens, bu then again this wasn't a set up... set up trust tests especially when they find out really hurt people...)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 23:03 PDT
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It was fantastic, realy. I loved it... I don't even know what to say, but I have this big grin on my face, so I think that should go pretty far in exspressing what I'm feeling right now... I'm not particularly happy that it took you so long to update, but I'll give you a break because that was perfect. Just please don't make me wait so long next time...
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Reviewed By: SexyCtarlCtarl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome. Please keep writing! I can not wait until your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. We always make it out the men are the only perverts. When in all honesty, women are just as bad. I like that you incorporate in the story that Sango is curious about Kagome's sexual experience. It gives your characters a more 'real' feeling. (and just in general, wonderful chapter!)
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Reviewed By: Light-Eco-Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for promising a fairly quick update. This story is too good to be left alone for long.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 21:57 PDT
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tee-hee, it was very fluffy but i enjoied it just the same. cant wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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