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| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Title: I feel good and abused :D
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just to let you know, though I loved the drama of the chapter, but I'm cryin on the inside cause I thought for sure this time right, but no, once more the bait is dangled and then taken away. Lol, all joking aside I can't wait for more, its fun reading your story everytime.
| Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 22:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I for one love your story! I think the detail in your recent chapter was fine. I honestly was expecting worse. It was a very good chapter! In all honesty, if a person does not like your story or anything you have in it they don't have to read it, skip ahead or whatever. Anyways, keep up the good work!
| Title: you are great!
Reviewed By: sango_gurlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing! you are simply amazing, this story keeps me on my toes. the cliffys are just so suspenseful. you are just an inspiring person. keep up the great work, i look forward to reading your newest chapters formally, Trisha=]
| Title: great
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 22:39 PDT
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loved the chapter. i realised from the begining what inuyasha wanted to say, but you know him...say first, think later...i just hope kagome's alright
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 19:19 PDT
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I read it, I loved it... Now I'm just curious as to how you're going to fix it... I don't think Kagome should instantaniously forgive him, after something like that, having her faith so deeply shaken that she was even weary of her other friends, I don't think its even possible to forget, let alone forgive. But I'm afraid that's what you're going to do, he'll save her, and she'll forgive him. It will be as if it never happened, please don't do that. Let her forgive him ofcourse, but don't let her forget what he said so soon. After something like that I would be devistated, even more resolute, but definatly devistated.
| Title: INUYASHA!!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea yea yea, he was mean from the heart like he always is, I'm sticking with Sango on this one he definitely needed to be slapped. He's got his chance to make it right though in the next chapter and you know I'll be here writhing at the end of this rope you hung us all from on this evil little cliff.
| Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 06:26 PDT
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Perhaps I should rephrase myself in my reaction last review. I completely understood Inuyasha's reaction, however was thinking exactly what Miroku stated: there's no way in hell Inuyasha would let anything happen to her, and she is strong enough to understand she has people who accept her as she is. I knew Inuyasha was lying about well, lying. xD I kept thinking what a colossal jackass he was to try and threaten her with sending her away, when what that could ultimately amount to is her being on her own for all those things he's worried about TO happen to her. Anyways, it looks like this youkai is going to help them face each other sooner. =3 Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep ging I love your writeing
| Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 05:33 PDT
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I warn you now that I nitpick, so bare that in mind. Begin rant. Use my imagination? Use MY Imagination?! But... but... *sputter* that's not fair! I already said what I thought it looked like! (see review on 1/15/09) How can you not know what it looks like when you said in your author's notes for Ch 13 "I purposefully left out a description of the dagger because nobody really got a good look at it. Kagome saw it had a silver hilt, but that's it. More will be revealed later, I promise." That very heavily implies that you HAD a clear idea what it looks like! If you hadn't said that it never would have occurred to me that you were purposely leaving out a description in the first place, which of course made me obsess on every detail you did reveal in order to catch whatever clues you were trying to leave. GAH! I've been trying to solve a puzzle that didn't even exist! *pant, pant* End rant. Well now that that is out of my system... Do I get anything for having been you 100th review? Congratulations on that by the way. In response to your newest A/N: I can't say what any of his other fans would do given such an opportunity, although I suspect many of them would try to molest him. Personally I almost always take his side on most of his arguments especially with Kagome since more often than not she acts like spoiled little brat. And I usually give him the benefit of the doubt since I do keep in mind that he has had such a hard life, but all that being said he often behaves like an ass, and when he does something so earth shatteringly stupid as he did in last chapter it's only reasonable to want to hit him upside the head for it or, as in my case, want to respond for Kagome. But in truth running away is much more in character for her than confronting the problem. Kagome is motivated by her heart more than her head. You touched on it lightly, but I think it was a bigger part of her decision than you implied that Inuyasha was responding more to her since she became a hanyou. He was mesmerized by her abs. She smelled his reactions to her multiple times, but probably assumed that they were new since her change. He kissed her for the first time for a reason other that trying to save each other's lives. Add into that her demon side already views him as her mate, admittedly her demons side's feelings on the situation would be subconscious present at best, but they would be in there somewhere. He also for the first time took her side against Kikyou. With all that running around in her head how could she choose anything other than to stay hanyou if from her point to view it meant she finally had a chance to be with the man she loves? The alternative would have been to give up on him. And then he basically said that he was faking his feelings for her. Once again I can't help but point out how Kikyou like that is. I think that both Kagome and Inuyasha got over their feelings too quickly. They are both brooders. If you do go back and edit this chapter at some point I would recommend finding away to put a little more time between the argument and the coming to their senses. It was just too fast.
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 01:43 PST
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i love the situations that you put both kagome and inuyasha into in this chapter. it made a great opportunity to develop a storm of emotional angst. the beginning of the chapter worked best for me. more thought seemed to be put into the emotion there. i think inuyasha's change of heart was a little rushed. i can't wait to read kagome's reaction to this change, though.
| Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 23:24 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not fun falling out of trees.Lol! Well I hope Inuyasha gets there in time or this will be a short story with a sad....er...no strange ending because the thing ate her. Great chapter by the way! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 22:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dirty, dirty little branches! God protect us all from their treachery.
| Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 15:51 PST
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awww poor Kagome, Inuyasha better confront her soon, and it wouldn't hurt to save her right about now either haha. I can't wait to see their conversation! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 15:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!!! I loved you little A.N. at the end too... he is very lucky... 99% of the time "we" feel like stealing him...
| Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 17:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahah! He reacted just like I would expect him to. VERY characteristic of him! I don't understand why people are getting angry with Inuyasha right now. Come on! He's the one that lived a hanyou's life for God knows how long! He had never known his father because of that. The loss of his mother is not unaffected by his heritage either. He had been shunned, ridiculed, and hunted for all his life because of what he was. Can anyone imagine how that must have been? Especially without no one there for you, to protect you? Now, if this guy does not want the most precious--alive--person in his life to live the life of a hanyou, how can you blame him? Besides, he's not being completely unreasonable in his beliefs. The problem is that Kagome has not seen everything he had yet. Put into the equation the fact that he risks his own life daily to protect her, I see nothing wrong with his reaction. Of course he will use whatever he can to change her decision. He can't physically force her to do anything, but knowing how much Kagome values her friends... "I lied." This is not the first time he had said it, is it? Though, the first time he had been honest. As always, very good chapter! I'm captivated!
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