| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 14:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better! Srsly! This is lyk, my first ever favoreted fanfic!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 04:22 PST
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i continue to enjoy the wonderful story you are creating. you have a very natural and easy writing style that raises the readability factor. seeing how differently kagome handles being a hanyou than inuyasha deals with it, brings up many questions. is it because her personality would naturally react to adversity this way? or is it because her outlook on life has already been set? it could even be due to having company in her situation--a guide who's been through it all before and can help her over the rough spots. whatever the reasons, it gives them both a chance to experience the other's life a little and will serve to bring them closer. i didn't get a chance to review the last chapter, but after reading the author's note about the sword i laughed out loud. the parallel you drew, combined with inuyasha kissing his sword and saying how much he loved it was great.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story today, and I was planning to wait until I finished all the chapters to write my comments, but oh boy, this chapter made me throw that plan out of the window. Honestly, when I read the title 'Role Reversal' and figured that it was about the night of the new moon, I thought that Kagome would use her new powers to protect a human Inuyasha. Never in a million years could I guess what it was really about! That was hilarious! I can still picture his face while she carried him over her shoulder. Marvelous! Since I started commenting, I must say I found the idea of 'rebirth spell' definitely brilliant. I don't remember reading anything like that before. As for your writing... I get the idea that you already think you write good, so I don't know what to say except that I agree with you. I'll probably be leaving more reviews as I continue reading the already posted chapters, so be ready to hear from me again, and thanks for sharing this story with us!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter! (very funny Robot Chicken ep too...) poor Sango... Miroku better get his act together...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! Man...what is wrong with miroku? I hope shippo is okay. The people in that village needs to be taught a lesson.well as for the people that hurt shippo...Enyone who harms children should be killed or at least burn their village down and make them suffer! They are worse then the demons they hate so much.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 21:06 PST
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omg shippo! hurry hurry hurry! update update update! (sorry, after 4 hours of math my brain is fried, but i did read it and i liked it and thats what i thought when i got to the end so yeah... update soon! and dont hurt shippo!)
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 19:49 PST
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wow at the end there was a really jarring image. For some reason I imaged him dead first.... poor Shippo!! I like the added Sango/Miroku parts and the Inuyasha Kagome fluff. Hehe. And I like how you're giving the"enemies" personalities. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 13:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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As soon as I saw the chapter was titled "Pulse" I did a little jump for joy. I love the moments when Inuyasha regains his abilities and kicks some butt. I love love love this story!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: January 26, 2009 23:50 PST
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This is a pretty good story. And I did guess that Inu was gonna change back just in time. The title Pulse kinda gave it away with how his body pulses just b4 he changes back. I really hope u keep Kags a hanyou, I've always really liked that idea since it gets rid of lil problems. Like the fact that Inu is gonna WAY out live her, plus any kids they have would only be 1/4 youkai which is a depressing thought. OH!!!! And I totally knew the Shreder reference was a TMNT thing. I LOVED that show when I was a kid. My sis and I stole a tape with some episodes on it from my mom's job when I was 5. Still had it till about 4 months ago when my vcr ate it. Anyway sry 4 blabbing on like that update soon and ttyl ok ja!!!
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Title: cool beans
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad everything worked out in the end... I'm going to guess thats not the end of tweedle dee and tweedle dumb. I'm looking forward some romancing between Inu and Kagome ;) (quit being impatiant, impatiant people)
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 21:15 PST
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i thought for a second there you were going to have Kagome get jealous over Inu Yashas attention to Sango... it would have been interesting, but im glad you didnt...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter... (I read it over an hour ago but had to leave to go and enrol in a temp agency that has taken over the contract for where I work (but only to find out that they have finished for the day as no one booked for the last session (helps if it want on Uni enrolment day and IF ANYONE knew about it... not that I should expect that...) Two whole chapters!!! Kagome is now wonder girl, I wonder what Miroku is going to do...
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 18:49 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed that very much. I liked the fact that Tessaiga helped bring InuYasha's youkai back to where it belonged, just like his youkai helped Tessaiga in the manga. Your misdirect worked until I saw "pulse" and I knew what was bound to happen - and I'm glad it did. InuYasha may be cute as human but he certainly doesn't like being stuck that way any longer than is necessary. good chapter and I look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 19:51 PST
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i feel a little cheated... i was so excited because there was another chapter up, but it took me all of 10 minutes to read it...
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 14:41 PST
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What the hell, I've been following all your fics since the beginning yet I haven't commented??? =0 *slaps self* I am so lazy! xD Anyways KB, you've done it again! Another magnificent chapter with the right amount of angst, action, and laughs. Ohhhh, I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder if Miroku and Kagome will save Inu and Sango! I wonder if Kagome will have any memories of going full youkai! And now that I know what that dagger's supposed to do, I'm all the more worried about those siblings... Augh, the suspense is killing me, man! xDDD I hope you update soon!
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