| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 19:16 EST
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This story is great! I haven't read a really good halloween themed story in awhile.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 18:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol...yeah. The holiday rocks. Since I couldn't celebrate it properly I dressed up as a Catrina figure for Halloween and walked the East Village Parade in NY with a bunch of other fiestaing Day of the Dead-ers. Really fun... But I think mentioning the shrine and summoning part was enough (I had no clue about the mirror thing 0.o) since that was the whole reason Souta wanted to celebrate it, right? Oh! And Kudos on this latest chapter! Being able to communicate inside each others heads was something I've NEVER seen done before and it was hi-larious! I loved when Kagome went to the church, too and asked for what she did...what the hell! Gearing up to fight a vampire, much? I'd love to see her try a stake and holy water on a demon. Greaaat chapter! I look forward to the next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool....I can't wait to see how InuYasha reacts to her family problems...probably try to help in his own bumbling way...can't wait for the next chapter! Are you planning on writing a lemon for this?
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: November 07, 2008 08:50 EST
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I can't wait for more. I love protagonist that are evil, they make the story much more interesting. Who the heck is in the room? Probably that Saito guy. I wonder what Inuyasha's going to do when Kagome finally lets him out, or he lets himself out
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 01:24 EST
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I love how you're mixing religion in, and how Kagome and Inuyasha have a mind connection. And is Sango a demon in this one or are you using alternate pairings? I suppose I will just have to find out. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 01:12 EST
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AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: Kovnik On: November 04, 2008 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this looks to be a very fun and original fic, lz keep writing it.
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Reviewed By: clavira88 On: November 03, 2008 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, i like it!! update!
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Reviewed By: artismehel On: November 02, 2008 21:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please continue
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Title: Amazing Halloweenie Fic ;)
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 09:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. I absolutely love your story, and like the others, I'm hooked. Heehee, Kagome-chan's so feisty! ;P Oh and is InuYasha in his hanyou or youkai form in this story? Although judging by the way he speaks, I'd guess he's in his traditional hanyou form. I really hope you continue with the next chapter soon! XD
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Reviewed By: buwan anghel On: November 02, 2008 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love the ending to this chapter. you should definately continue writing this story. i'm really interested into seeing how this story "grows". is inuyasha dark and dangerous? i'm thinking that inuyasha isn't really evil though in the story, maybe a lil "horny" lols.
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Reviewed By: kiss4ranma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow... Oh lovely... I think I'm hooked; that was a wonderful first chapter. Your sentence stucture and grammer are very well done without seeming overly polite and fake. I can see this is a plot to follow. Excuse me while I look into your other works. kiss4ranma
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Title: C Moon
Reviewed By: Crescent Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:10 EST
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Awsome! Keep it up. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Title: that's it!
Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Is that it?? Come on please continue!! This was awesome. I felt as if the story was just starting, we just got introduced to the doctor and what's happening with her mom. Also what was Kagome supposed to see from the trick mirror? Please please continue
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh. I'm intrigued. It's a rarity to read anything with a supernatural overtone that's not about vampires or werewolves these days. I especially liked the use of the various Halloween traditions from other cultures thrown in. It's been a while since I've read something that had me hooked from chapter 1, I hope you update soon.
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