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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 16:10 PDT
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Oohh... -chants- Prove it! prove it prove it prove it! lol This'll be interesting...
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 17:51 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the layers you are adding to this. Now we know Kagome's feelings about business and all the insanity that went on after her father died. I also like the idea of Inuyasha realizing his father may not be the ideal man he thought he was. The fact that he was bothered by the way Kagome's mom was treated really gives insight on his not being as evil as we may have thought. NOw, the emails were simply crazy! I loved it so much!! That was a great touch of humor and at the same time it shows Sess trying to do the right thing. It also paints a picture of a father who doesn't care who is hurt as long as he gets what he wants, be it his sons or Kagome! YOU ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 17:02 PST
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Finally they get together!!! I love the smexy sceans in the last chapter!!! Hope things work out for them both in the future!!! Keep up the great updates!!!
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Reviewed By: FL On: January 23, 2009 22:42 PST
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Get 'im, Sesshomaru!! -shoves her shotgun into his hands- Use it at will!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 14:50 PST
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yes yes yes yes yes yes!! WOOT WOOT!! go kagome! who said a girl can't make the first move? *smirks and winks*
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Reviewed By: MmeFleiss On: December 22, 2008 20:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really nice twist in the latest chapter. I like the fact that she's given other options instead of just mooning over Seshoumaru the entire time, and that she genuinely seems interested rather than doing it solely to either make someone else jealous or as a replacement for the one she can't have.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 12:37 PST
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ooh... who is it?! I want to know! I love the introspective chapter. You are doing very well with their characters I believe. :D
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Reviewed By: FL On: November 27, 2008 13:23 PST
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Now, now, asshole, say the truth. Don't be such a jerk! lol. I love these oneshot ficlets and this universe. It's very intriguing. I'm glad I found it. :)
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: November 27, 2008 04:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just adore your work. You are very talented at writing and storytelling. Now that I found you, I can't resist to read what you've come up with next. This particular piece if fun and flirty. I'm so enjoying the ride. Till next time. JEN
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Reviewed By: lovethypuppy On: November 21, 2008 10:46 PST
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I am soo hooked on this little fic. I think it's really good and I have to say I re-read this fic a lot. I'm so happy that you've extended it some more and that there is more to come. The way you write leaves the reader in anticipation. Please write more when you can. I can't wait until Kagome finishes what she started. ;0) Thanks again.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 10:22 PST
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oooh... lol. Nice! I like this. two thumbs up!! I'll definitely be waiting for more.
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Reviewed By: gradualwisd0m [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 18:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this and that you didn't immediately throw them together :) I anticipate a continuation!
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