Title: Chronal Flux, Temporal Deviance
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 02:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm... very good, except the bottom section. It is more likely that Sarutobi would have continued to keep our poor Naruto-kun disguised as a female. He really would rather not have a replay of that doctor, or worse. The jumping around was odd. If Iruka is his/her/its legal guardian, then shouldn't he/she/it live with him? As for ettiquete... I actually find it EXTREMELY disturbing when Naruto-kun shows fine ettiquete. The brashness is one of the most loved traits about him. And it also pisses off aristocratic types, which I fully condone, support, and would incorporate into a religion. And what the hell kind of Jutsu was Sakura messing with? From the way Kishimoto-Sama set it up, only a Fuinjutsu would have been capable of even remotely similar effects, and it would likely require the sacrifice of at least 10 A ranked ninja at full strength to be able to cause even a minor flux in the time space continuum. Based on that, I'd have to say that some apocalyptic shit must have been going on for her to attempt something that likely is a suicide technique (like how Chiyo-sama brought back Gaara). Oh well. MORE LOVIN' FOR NARUTO-KUN! And their are worse things than what Sasuke can imagine (50 ft. nose hairs cutting through hardened steel? Not as bad as being beat to death by a Duck-shaped training toilet). MAY YOUR YOUTH BURN ETERNAL! The Goliath's Commandment - Our name is Goliath, and we are Legion! Let not the Fan Girl live, for they are the abomination of the Emo! ::twitch::
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