| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: LizBa On: February 03, 2004 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it finally a funny inuyasha romance fanfic!
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 11, 2004 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
What about the babys you baka tell us about the babys . Will it be boy or girl twens ? what ? one more chapter plese just one more .
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Reviewed By: link2910 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic is good but the grammar and spelling is awful
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Reviewed By: Shini Maxwell On: August 20, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thx 4 the good laugh |
Reviewed By: kuroneko On: August 03, 2003 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SO KAWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE ME LUV IT!!!!!!!! if you write a squeal email me at squeaky_1989@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was truely a original and good fan fic i look forward to reading more of your works |
Reviewed By: Bsasami153 On: February 25, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kept me riveted to the chair, like and, and, and no more! When is the next update? |
Reviewed By: Jessica chang On: December 03, 2002 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!!!I want a sequel
contact me and tell me if there is going to be a sequel
changjessica2x5@yahoo.com
ja ne,
Jessica Chang |
Reviewed By: JAMES On: November 10, 2002 22:37 CST
Comment/Review:
IT WAS SOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I JUST LOVED IT!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaorinite87 On: September 29, 2002 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great and I loved the ending. |
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O.... You are SOOOOOO much better at fanfic writing than me... such drama... such emotion.... I LOVE IT!!!!!! Heehee. And good thing I read it after you updated the final chapter too, 'cause I wouldn't be able to wait for the next chapter^-^;;... This was really good. If you want, you could be a very successful writer^_^ Hope to read more from you Kari-sama! (I call everyone better than me 'sama' so get used to it ^_~)
Oh yeah, and about the grammer rating, some of the wording at the begginning and places in the middle were other words than what you meant and you constantly did it. (sorry if that didn't make sense O.o...) Um... and... I guess that's it^^ Everything else is just fine! After a while, I got used to the misspellings anyway. |
Reviewed By: Kome Ona On: July 30, 2002 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it!! How could you leave us in the dark like that?!? *sniffle,sniffle
The sheer....Sessy-ness of it all!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!
Please? lol
Great fic!!
Kome |
Reviewed By: telosphilos On: July 25, 2002 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it is pretty difficult to get a ten out of me, but I do like what you are doing here. You have managed to generate an interesting and novel story. I am curious as to what is going to happen between the dog brothers and their mates. I feel a little sorry for Amy though and I would love to see Inuyasha take his brother aside and try and convince him to treat his mate better. (Chapter 13 was the most recent one when I posted this.) Kindness would certainly break her a lot faster than forcefulness.
I would recommend trying to find an editor. You are making some spelling errors that a spell checker isn't going to catch. It is the homonym problem most of the time and some incorrect word usage. Damn and dame are not the same word. (That was the most glaring one in there.) At a guess, some of the general types of errors look almost like you aren't using your native language. If that is the case, then please ignore me. I have nothing, but admiration for people who can write in a foriegn language.
There are several points that could use a bit more developement, like the original character of Amy. She needs a little more direct background given at the start of the fic and a touch more on her relationships with the rest of the characters would help too.
Overall, good job. I'm just a critic, feel free to ignore me. |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 00:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waii!!!!! Continue, onegai shimasu!!!!!! I love the emotions put into this. And the chapters are just the right length!
I await the next update!
Ja ne, Kari-san.
Anata
Watashi no matenai. (I am impatient) |
Reviewed By: Sailor Fortune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ehehe, this is fun....please, continue! i wanna see what happens to Amy! |
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