Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 18:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: The text is in white...nothing a highlight can't fix, but you might wanna change it so that others don't think you've just posted up a blank page. As for the content..its pretty interesting. I'm not usually for the Inu/OC but I can appreciate anything with proper grammar and a well-written, if somewhat vague plot. And I especially like how the narrator is so real and unafraid to admit to her faults. You should continue. I'd like to see more, hopefully, on why InuYasha acts the way he does.
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