| "Preventors' Case #84309: Splicers" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaylan On: April 26, 2016 23:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was incredible!!!! I know Gundam Wing is such an old
anime. I'm glad I revisited this fandom and was able to discover
and enjoy your work. Love it!!!! Is Heero gonna stay spliced? I
know he doesn't like it, but it would be hot to "see " him and Duo
together like that. Please update even though it's been a while.
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Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2011 01:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!! Looking forward to the next chapter...Heero has to save Kitten!!!! keep up the great work!! |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 19:12 PDT
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O M G!!! This story is so good!!!! I have seen in around posted on different sites like raygun but it wasn't it until today that I thought I should give it a try. I am sooooo happy I did. This is one of the best fanfics of read lately I can't believe how deep and twisting the plot is. Very well thought out. Oh and while I was reading it I suspected that Quatre might be the benefactor. I should have made the connection between him being benefactor and him being angry about Rhys. Oh and Hilde wow, idk what is more surprising her lusting after Heero, her showing up, her helping G, or her having Heero fired to draw Duo out... I really can't decide. The only issue I have had with the story so far is Heero's out of the body experience. I mean I might have believed it if Dr. G had done it since he is obviously better at splicing than Murai (I might spelled the villian's name wrong) but really? I sort of see it as a cop out to finding out all the information on Heeros own. I mean don't get me wrong it was super exciting reading it but yeah hard to believe honestly. Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!!! I can't wait to see how it ends. I think G might have to save Trowa's life with splicing. I wonder when everything comes out if the g boys will the same. Especially with all the secrete with holding going on. And Kitten doesn't seem as innocent as we thought....
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Reviewed By: Red Solitaire On: September 18, 2010 05:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I so hope that U have not abandoned this fic. It is really amazing I I stayed up all night just to finsish it. I will be looking on this site for updates. Blessings to you, Solitare
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Reviewed By: CrazyLilAngel On: June 30, 2010 04:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I just stayed up pretty much all night reading it. Please update again soon - I need to know how this all carries on!!
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Reviewed By: alena_m On: March 27, 2010 09:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hej, I don't do reviews very often, but I was literally delighted when I discovered the new chapter yesterday. I was fortunate enough to have read this fic only 2 month ago, so you are still on my radar of fics I look for news every other week or so. I absolutely love the story. I think it is particularly well thought trough and I like how you integrate the GW characters with your own new ones, which are plenty, and somehow everyone of them has their right to be there, from the name to the cologne =). I mean it doesn't feel like "well… I want this or that to happen to Heero, so there has to be an evil scientist…" Well, let's just say I like the fandom and I'm always delighted when I discover a new (for me) great author in it. Keep up! And greetings from Austria Alena_m
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2010 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...can't wait to read more. I'm still wondering about Heero's transformation and if parts of his human DNA has been destroyed, how much of him can be restored? And that hypnotic suggestion that Dr. G seems to have put on Duo, does he get that removed and his free will given back? I'm still guessing his consciousness transferred itself to Kitten somehow through the tanks, but I'll have to wait and see. And Hilde, are her changes permanent and was it her egg voluntarily given in this case to create kitten? Heh, looks like Heero's not the only guy with tinknered strenght and endurance now, he or Duo would make great ultimate soldiers :P Who is Heero's intended target for the bad guys (personally I hope the guy dies anyway *lol*) Anyhow, can't wait to read the next chapter, great story, I'm addicted to it. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 15:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm....I guessing it was Duo inside Kitten when he tried to escape....how did that happen? And what was Duo protesting against that had to do with Heero? So....if Murai's formulas destroy human DNA, does that mean, Heero is stuck with at least some of his changes? What is Duo's big secret? I also really hope that they all forgive and make up with eachoter (Quatre, Relena, Duo, Heero, etc) It'd be sad if they didn't. :)
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 12:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are heating up! Can't wait to see where you're going with it :) Hope Heero and Duo have a happily ever after :P
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Reviewed By: hummel On: March 21, 2010 00:10 PDT
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Great chapter! Glad you are back!!
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Reviewed By: Xander B [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2010 10:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've been waiting for this update for so long. I'm glad you finally managed to find the time and inspiration to update it. It's a truly intriguing fanfic. I hope you continue it soon. Also, you should consider putting it up on Adultfanfiction.net. I know you'd get a lot of hits on there with this. Anyways, great work! Xander
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Reviewed By: Isha Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2009 17:02 PDT
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Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this story!! I've been pouring over it for a few days now, saving each chapter as a treat. I really enjoy how involved the plot line is and how it's not easy to guess what's going to happen. I really commend you for being so steady in your writing. Don't quit now, you're in the home stretch!!
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Reviewed By: berneynator On: August 29, 2009 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a really cool idea. I just found this story on the Little Piece of Gundam Wing site, I was hoping you might have more posted somewhere else. I love how it's not at all predictable, you're doing a really good job of keeping the suspense up. I feel so bad for Heero, everyone he thought he could trust is betraying him. Quatre is kind of annoying me, maybe I'm just too used to the pushover fandom characterization but I want him to try to be a little more understanding. I'd love to see some more interaction between Heero and Wufei and especially the best-friendship Heero and Trowa, but I'm not trying to push! I love Kitten/Rhys- is that the name of a Gaelic death god, or is that just me? I really want an explanation for Duo's actions, and I want him to be a good guy. I'm really enjoying the flashbacks to earlier times, it's helping me to understand the situation that led up to Duo's leaving. It's cool how you don't make any of these characters the blameless sufferer, Duo has his petty moments and Heero lets his desires take over sometimes what would be best for others (ex: wanting to kill the bad guys before rescuing the little kids at the Auction). I still love them though! My only quibble is that the occasional grammar error throws me off for a bit, but I think I'm more critical in that area than most people. Regardless, your writing style is a lot better than I find most of the time, you've really sucked me into this story. Please update soon, and thanks for a really wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Kari27 On: June 03, 2009 22:59 PDT
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What was Heero spliced with? You never did say. I've been checking all the time to see if you've updated yet. I could hardly contain myself. ;P Can't wait for the next chapter. Ta.
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Title: Angry_Betta
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 21:38 PDT
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Awesome! I love how suspenseful this is and there is always just a few more pieces of the puzzle are reviled every chapter and i am dying to find out! Keep writing!
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