"Universegate" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Storyreader101 On: March 21, 2009 20:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is amazing. I like how you put both Atlantis and SG1 charters with the Avatar charters and the story it self. Although I would wish that in future chapters you would re-introduce the Atlantis and SG1 charters back to the plot because I think you sort of lost them since one of the chapters. But overall, one of the best stories I have read. Good job and keep on writing.
| Reviewed By: RyuYushi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 16:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: A very original fanfiction idea to be sure. Your writing style is a bit rough around the edges and you made some minor spelling errors, but overall it's a good fic. You can be sure that I'll be waiting for updates.
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