| "Mountainside" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 04:41 CDT
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i love the descriptions of the grifter- miroku's cons and doing everything to ensure he's always on top (pun intended). --cue 'the entertainer' ♥
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Reviewed By: ardy1 On: April 02, 2009 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The "9" for spelling and grammar was just because I noticed a verb missing in the sentence as to Miroku's reputation, and maybe there were one or two other bits that made me wonder as to thorough proofreading. It is so wonderful to see you resume this effort, and I do hope we don't have to wait another three months for further postings. You have wit and style unmatched in this fandom, and I so enjoy your presentation of the characters! This AU is intriguing. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 31, 2009 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You crack me up with the Twilight intermission. (Snigger.) I do enjoy reading your InuYasha stories with your unique sense of humor. What has Miroku spread as gossip? And Sango a herbalist and tajiya? I hope all it well with you Ithilwen and your writing. Hope to read you again (soon), Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 23:53 CDT
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ohh, the players are assembling. one wonders how the game will play out. ♣ --and much appreciation for continuing. ♦ amusing intrigue. ♥ gin
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! You put up another chapter of this imaginative and excellent piece of fanfiction! Thank you so very much for updating and not leaving this story at one chapter like you said you probably were going too. And I look forward to seeing how you continue to combine the original story and Inuyasha together. However you do it, I'm sure it will be excellent. Thank you for updating and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: January 02, 2009 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Ithilwen, it has been a while since I have left a review. I had to tell you that it was a great chapter. Laughed my buttakus right off of my seat. You have the best humor mixed with just the right amount of smarttalk. Just sorry that I can not come up with a more original review description. I am really hoping that you might complete this story. Good stories are few and far between these days, but I still love a good read with the InuYasha characters, so I am always fishing around here. Please come back. Your friend, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 23:48 CST
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i shall add to the consensus in the opinion that this was wonderful and the plea for you to continue it. ♥
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is too bad you aren't planning on continuing this story because there are so many questions this raises that I would love to see answered. For example, What happened to Inuyasha's mother? Is she alive or dead? And why would Inuyasha's father want him to establish a town anyway? What gain would he obtain from a town? If, as your story mentions, the Inuyoukai pack moves around a lot, what good would tribute from a town do them? Or is the purpose of establishing the town just the means for Inuyasha to gain a place he can fit in? Since he can't fit in with the pack, his father gives him a task to do, that way Inuyasha doesn't feel totally abandoned because he is doing something for his father but at the same time, he creates a place he himself fits in. Maybe that was the purpose of creating the town? And what about Inuyasha's back story in this story? How did he gain Tessaiga in this story? Will he meet Kagome and how? And there are many more questions like what about Miroku? Does he have the wind tunnel in this story? I know you said you weren't planning on continuing this story but it would be awesome if you changed your mind because I believe it has a ton of potential. If you do change your mind, trust me, I'll be right here reading along. Well I hope you had a Happy Holidays and I hope you have a health, happy, New Year. Sincerely, Zach
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Title: Great as always
Reviewed By: AKAPirateQueen On: December 28, 2008 21:15 CST
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I love these two! It's been a long time since I read a really creative approach to this relationship. Sorry to hear you're not planning to continue, but maybe you'll change your mind...? (hoping!)
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