| "One Short Story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: mellymel On: June 20, 2010 01:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was intense. Not a pairing that I have read before, but written wonderfully. Definately a good story and I would love to read more.
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Title: Title? :O
Reviewed By: EWHH its Kenna On: March 02, 2009 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the whole set up. It's perfectly written and the characterizations themselves are amazing. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter! (Is there an update schedule, or should I just check approximately every month?)
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 13:23 CST
Comment/Review:
that was just great! i really loved it! looking forward to the next chapter! xoxo;b
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Reviewed By: LexLex On: February 16, 2009 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I am really interested in reading more of your story. I really enjoy both Sakura's personality and the relationship betrween Itachi and Sasuke(and that's a first because I was never found of yaoi). plus I am curious on what impact will Sakura bring upon Sasuke, not to mention that I am eager to see the relationship between her and Itachi. In the end I really like your writing style and probably what I loved the most was the paragraph of her playing with the butterflies; it was really well written. congrats.
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