| "Sweet Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 07:42 EDT
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*points out something* she said sit and he didn't go boom in the first chapter o.o *smiles sheepishly* Sorry if i came off a bit mean or something there.... i love the story so far and i've only read like the first chapter...I'll write another review when I finish reading the rest of it
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 09:07 EST
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this was a great story! i would like an epilouge or a sequel so we can find out what happened later on with youko and kagome, i mean in the future youko is kurama and kagome is nowhere around. the ending was a nice change from the standard where kagome gets stuck in the future and cant return to her family and friends in the past, but it does make you want to know more.
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Reviewed By: aura9969 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 21:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic, but there were some rough spots with the grammar/spelling; otherwise it was a really enjoyable read. I hope that you do start a sequel to this story; it would be interesting to see where you will go with it. If you need a beta let me know, I have an account here on mediaminer it's aura9969. I have one fic that I wrote years ago and re-reading it I can't stop wondering what I was thinking when I started it..it's that bad!
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Title: sequel
Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you make a sequel it should be about how Youko is killed and how Kagome make it to her old time era and made Kurama and Youko feels his mateing mark on Kagome and she meets him and the other cause they need help and thier boss calls Kag's to help them. Or something like that
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 15:03 EST
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I have very much enjoyed this fic! I hope that you do write a sequel, but if you do you should make it about how youko became Kurama and what happened to Kagome. cause idk that chapter had me confused. lol. well hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: Niren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 04:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeels* you right now are my favorit person. I have never seen a fanfic Author get a story done so quickly. Keep Up the good work and I enjoy your writing sooo much *smiles* Wonderful writing with a plot. One of the few good stories I have read in a while that has decent writing. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kryslo On: January 20, 2009 23:24 EST
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I loved the story, but I really wish you'd write an epilogue or a sequel to tie together Youko's future self and Kagome. Maybe they find each other again in the future? Hmm?
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story but there is one thing that may confuse readers. In an earlier chapter you had Kagome attack Youko because of Midoriko saying Naraku had found the well, gone through and killed her family... then you had her go through and see her family perfectly alive. I was lost but ignored it and ventured to ask you about it once I finished the story if it didn't explain itself. So what happened there? Still love the story and all though- keep up the good work. -Dusken
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 19:39 EST
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sequel please!!!!!
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Title: i would love to read sequel
Reviewed By: Nelle22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would really love to read a sequel to this, hopefully with those two in the future, so i guess kagome's kits get a daddy!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: January 20, 2009 07:42 EST
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Hoho, nice story!
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Title: Cruelness, i tell you!
Reviewed By: CrystalHeart27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is perfect! I had recently discovered MediaMiner, because Fanfiction lacks KagomeKurama/Youko pairings. I came across a few of them so far, but this one has really piqued my interest! It's really great and i hope you update soon!! :D
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Title: In love
Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i so love your story !! I hope you keep going cause think this is a kick ass story
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Reviewed By: squeefan88 On: January 16, 2009 23:30 EST
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This is a wonderful story so far. I really like it. I hope you update soon! Great work.
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Reviewed By: midnight3498 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! can't wait to read more
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