| "As A Courtesan" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome has been having really bad luck - getting poisoned and now raped & marked by sesshoumaru... but then he agreed to mate with kagai who tried to kill kagome... how will that affect kagome and sesshoumaru's bite mark?... things just got complicated... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that naraku endured his sister's whips... will naraku be a good guy and side with kagome?... glad that miroku came and saved kagome... will naraku tell them who the intruder was?... what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 02:47 CST
Comment/Review:
It's an interesting take on the characters and I look forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, nice, but whats up with Naraku.. he's actually like.. icconcent-ish. But I like it none the less. Plese keep writing!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... hope kagome survives - but how?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
it seems a bit jumbled, and moves too quickly...
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic... I like it... But I'd also like a bit more non-sexual intamacy between Kags and Fluffy. I'm a big perv and all, but hey, can't have a relationship out of sex... well, not a good one anyway... And I also think that you should put some of your chapters together... there just too short too my liking. But I'm a big fan of Inuyahsa...So I'd definally like to see him in here more!(No Kikyo please) Maybe he could be a rival of Seshomaru's or something? A Triangle where Kagome loves both? IDK, just more details and keep on writing the way u are. Can't wait to read more!
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