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Title: *too lazy to log in...*
Reviewed By: Little_Red On: February 11, 2009 14:38 CST
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...i havent even read the story yet, and i was going to... the name caught my attention, so then i went to read the summary... and now i cant read it... "Kagome gets owned" fix it... please... kagome winds up being owned, or to pay off her fathers dept kagome is "sold" to inu yasha something like that... just change it please...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is still trying to figure out how to keep her promise to rin and make inuyasha happy... nice that they went to the carnival though... and inuyasha is acting sweet... wonder who they'll bump into at the carnival... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 05:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story so far, i really loved the theme. update a.s.a.p plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... cute parts with rin and kagome... wonder if kagome will keep her promise to rin... nice that inuyasha talked with sesshoumaru... seems that the brothers know kagome's father... interesting that inuyasha is starting to have feelings for kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! So let me guess..the mean lady is kikyo! I hope he doesn't try to hook up with kikyo again....blech!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha knows quite a lot about kagome... feel sad for kagome and what her father did in the past... looks like inuyasha is showing his soft side... what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Oh my lord...O_O
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could a father do that to his five year old daughter! What the hell was he thinking?! Someone should bash the sick freak over the head with a baseball bat.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beat the father!!!! You don't do THAT to a five year old. Then he says that no one understands him. Why should they??
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Black chocker with a bell on it...MAN now I'm having tokyo mew mew flashbacks!
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Its interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... inuyasha & kagome's banter is so cute and funny... wonder what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good so far! ^_^
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: February 01, 2009 14:42 CST
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so far this story is adorable. i can't wait until the next chapter. update as soon as possible, please and Thank you XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 11:33 CST
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amusing and entertaining-- a suggestion, sometimes it is a good idea to get someone to read over our work to catch typos and minor errors that we miss.
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