| "A Twist of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: dos_bytes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
try ending it with Brock and Misty like going to dinner or something. Then Brock takes her somewhere and he proposes or they make out.
you could also give ash a gurl at the end! |
Reviewed By: magic_dream_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
its cool! please write another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Usagi On: July 19, 2002 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It's very kool. Cept... I can't imagine Seto doing that stuff. And everybody here appears to hate Darien except me! ;.; Well, the fanfic was really kool.
Seto is REALLY cute by the way. n.n They make a good match. Serena and Seto, I mean. I like this Seto. I never paid much atention to his eyes except now! ^.^
Great fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Lady Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very Good. Write more! |
Reviewed By: ty On: July 18, 2002 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the it when you put sm/y. but next itme put serena/yugi. please update soon.
ty |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice intro. Is Ash included by any chance? He would be a good match with Hotaru-chan, Tracey x Michelle and Mina x Brock |
Reviewed By: Kvaedi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seto Kaiba and Sailor Moon...hm. Darien was a chump anyway, and I don't see Seto as the Yaoi type. Maybe he's a little OOC in this story, but I don't care, it's nice to see him liking someone who isn't the author's personal OC. =D
Well, anyway, it's cute! I love Kaiba, and I apologize for "killing" him. =P
Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Duelist Luna On: July 17, 2002 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright! this is great! keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Angel of Reality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very cute...but...O___O I CANNOT Imagine Kaiba doing that stuff.and loving someone...O____O someone like Serena/Usagi, but she's ok. Kaiba, i think, was just too OOC!! (out of character) ^_^ write more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luved it! You said to read and i am glad i did!! Aww.. Seto's blue eyes are I guess what every Seto-luver likes...::sighs:: Plus his voice actors something to dream about too... uh yeah! Great story! Keep it up write more!!!!!!!!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) You know me!! |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 15:07 CDT
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omg its soo beautiful.... i want seto... i love him... ur style of writing is very unique and well done. |
Reviewed By: Sakura22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 13:54 CDT
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To Setobsessed, if you come back, Darien died in the last battle with the Negaverse. (At least in my story he did!) |
Reviewed By: setobsessed On: July 17, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. one question though, what happened to darien? serena would never break up with darien (although i wish she did) |
Reviewed By: krazy_kitty_katz On: July 17, 2002 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it!!!! sakura get chapter 2 ready soon plz!!!!! (10 is good right? i based the rating on it being good!) |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love you forever if you decided to do Ash x Hotaru (giggles) I'm not much of a BAMRN fics. Good work as always. |
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