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| "Unexplainables Explained" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, excellent start! This story is going to be awesome. That Vegeta is really something else, but his wish really doesn't surprise me in the least. He just never does things the easy and happily ever after way. It really pisses me off sometimes. But you've gotta love him anyway.
So Bulma's going to be seperated from the group, huh? That sucks. Well, I'm sure she'll be all right. She always is. Wait... this is a Kahlan Nightwing story so I better not speak to quickly when it comes to everyone being okay in the end.
Great start and since you seem to have the next chapter already typed why don't you go ahead and post them tomorrow? Really, go ahead. I won't mind a bit. ^_^-JB | Reviewed By: Susan On: July 19, 2002 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Kami! I can't believe that Veggie would wish to be forgotten by everyone. But why? Bulma 's mind seems to be telling her that something is amiss. How sad. Now Ayami is looking for Vegeta and the earth has been invaded by a bunch of hormonally charge bastards and Bulma's gonna be sold. Shit! I don't even want to know what the hell you ingested to bring this about. Ok, I'm thoroughly depressed now...I hope you're happy -_-. | Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 18, 2002 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
spicy! i LOVE that word! i agree, bulma is spicy, well, her temper, that is!! yay! i love thsi story already. bulma forgot veggie. ha ha.
and you better not end the story there!!!! (please...) | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so honored, I'm the first to review this. :)
Wow! This is an excellent beginning. I love reading and trying to figure things out. :) No one seems to remember Vegeta. Though, Bulma's subconscious seems to be trying to remind her. that leads me to wonder, did Vegeta wish for everyone to forget about him?
Now for this Joso character, he/she seems quite evil, as well as freakish. :)
I can't wait for the next update. Is Bulma really going to be sold? What happens to the rest of the Z fighters?
Vegeta: More importantly, Where the hell am I?
ssjprincess: Yeah, that too. :) Anyhow, don't take too long. Oh, one more thing, *jumps up and down* I can't wait for you to post the next chapter of DOY! I don't care if it's 50 pages long, I'm just ready for a new chapter. :) | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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