| "Child Birth Complications" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... looks like kagome sure knows what she wants... kinda feel bad for inuyasha though since he was mated to kagome first but sesshoumaru is the one with a child with her first... seems like inuyasha got demoted in status or something - kinda like inuyasha is second best now... and now they have a contract... don't they follow youkai laws too or something... what will inuyasha & sesshoumaru do and decide?... what else will happen next... hope things work out for everyone though... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... looks like kagome sure knows what she wants... kinda feel bad for inuyasha though since he was mated to kagome first but sesshoumaru is the one with a child with her first... seems like inuyasha got demoted in status or something - kinda like inuyasha is second best now... and now they have a contract... don't they follow youkai laws too or something... what will inuyasha & sesshoumaru do and decide?... what else will happen next... hope things work out for everyone though... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She is so demanding! This is a new and interesting Kagome. I like it! I can't wait to see how the boys work it out.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... seems to have lots of drama... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Is this your whole story, or just summaries of chapters? It looks like a really good story, but needs to be longer.
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