| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 01:11 EDT
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Yay! That was such a wai! update! Keep up the excellent work. A snowball fight, that's just an awesome experience I assume. It never snows here in California. T.T
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 23:33 EDT
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love the kagome confrontation scene and the snowball fight!
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Title: AvidRabid
Reviewed By: **too lazy to log in** On: May 13, 2009 22:52 EDT
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Aww! It was perfect, cute and cuddly, and perfect! I love the snow fight seen, and I'm glad you made it just a snow fight, and not revenge for Inu Yasha, though Sango and Miroku would have deserved it... And yay for Kagome, she's always railed agianst Miroku never specifically Sango, it makes me happy when Kags ywlls at her... Anywho, great chapter, sorry I was too lazy to log in, and just so you know, I made a new account, my old one was Little_Red...
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWsome Story definately 10 out of 10 for originality. I can't stop reading it cus its not that predictabe either like some stories can be! keep Going doing AWsome!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 19:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I am so glad that Kagome was able to set Miroku and Sango straight. They needed to hear EVERYTHING she said. But I was especially glad to see that they LISTENED. I know that they were stressed out from their jobs and responsibilities....but they had been extremely unfair to Inuyasha and they needed to realize that. And as for the trip to the park at the end and the snowball fight....that was terrific. Miroku and Sango desperately needed to unwind...but they also needed to see Inuyasha as just their friend again, rather than a damaged asset to their cause. Kagome is a genius once again. And she and Inuyasha are too cute, I swear. LOVED it...and I can't wait to read more soon.
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Title: Previously know as Little_Red
Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 01:37 EDT
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I never understood why they just didn't have Inu Yasha make a public announcement saying he didn't support or oppose Muso... Muso still might have won but it would have helped... Oh well, whatever keeps the story going I guess... Anywho, I'm still waiting for Kagome to literally kick Sango's ass... It's building and building and something has got to happen between those two sooner or later... Great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha didn't take well to the news obviously. But what disturbs me more is that his so-called friends Miroku and Sango STILL don't seem to get Inuyasha at all. Sango's attitude in particular gets on my nerves. How could they not know that laying the weight of the city's well-being on one person's shoulders (particularly one who has sacrificed and been hurt as much as Inuyasha has) would do untold damage? That type of manipulation is reprehensible. I'm glad that Kagome let Miroku have it. I'd be even happier if she read Sango the riot act; Sango is entirely too self-righteous and judgemental towards Inuyasha. Yes, he's screwed up....but he deserves better from Miroku and Sango than he's getting. I guess they've gotten jaded since he's been messed up for so long. But...they really need to cut him some slack, particularly since they can see some real positive changes in his behavior.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 21:33 EDT
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And so the game begins....*sigh* How cruel can Sango and Miroku be to suddenly bring up a taboo topic?....Honestly this is such a good chapter. It makes a great turning point! Thank you for the update :D
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 12:30 EDT
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And so the plt thickens! Very good chapter! I am greatly enjoying this fic. Keep up the good writing. Hope to see an update soon, I'll keep my eyes on my inbox!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 12:26 EDT
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aww and Inuyasha was doing so well too! Everything seems to be taking a turn for the worst. And why do I feel like something is going to happen to Kagome to force Inuyasha to participate in the war? Well I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Were they, Miroku and Sango, really expecting Inuyasha to pull the citys collective ass out of the frying pan if another war broke out? That was the extent of their plan to handle another war if one should arise?! After seeing what the first one did to him I can't believe they would be so naive. At the very least they should have consulted with Kagome before talking with Inuyasha about the coming war. Naraku is still spying on Inu so I wonder if his setback will affect his plans? Not asking you to give anything away...just curious, is Tetsusaiga going to make an appearance?
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Reviewed By: ms.shay On: May 04, 2009 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very very good i love how you've writen it and the way the charcators particully inuyasha and kagome i hpoe you don't stop writting till THE END thank you so much for an excellent excellent fanfic ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT chapter. The "therapy" session in the department store with Inuyasha and Kagome was really illuminating. Inuyasha's self-hatred runs really deep. And Kagome truly is perfect for him. I LOVE reading their interactions. As for what Miroku and Sango found out...it doesn't look good. I truly hope that Kagome is able to help Inuyasha find himself again soon...because they are definitely going to need his help. And he is going to need all the strength mentally and physically that he can get.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 19:39 EDT
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Ha ha ha ha! Therapy session?! that's pure torture! There's nothing worse than shopping in the clothes deparment with a SHOPPER (person who looks, admires, and never shuts up). Inu-Yasha is really brave. Great chappie! Thanks for the very quick upload.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Inu really needs to forgive himself, to decide he wants to live again and that he deserves to be happy. Kagome has a plan to get him there! Unfortunately that's also playing into Naraku's hand. Can't wait to read more!
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