| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 20:56 EDT
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oh this chapter was so good it required me to cry out fanfastic in romanian... it would have written it but for my butchering of the spelling... so yeah, anywho, it was great! hurry up and up date soon!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 20:33 EDT
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Excellent again. Inuyasha is definitely getting better...but the battle againse his addiction is not won yet by a long shot. He's progressing rapidly....but still has a long way to go. i look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 01:48 EDT
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awww Inuyasha is trying so hard for Kagome. I bet he'll be irritated that she gave up her blanket for him in the morning heh. They are so cute together, I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 19:13 EDT
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Hey, to start i think your story is amazing. But the real reason I'm reviewing is i just realized that at some point in your story you mention Inuyasha putting whiskey in his coffee, and that it tasted bad. Well coffee and whiskey together is called an Irish coffee, and might I say is very delicious. So what you said is quite in accurate. Just so you know, I'm not criticizing you. And other than that your story is pretty much perfect!!!! Good job!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute chapter! It was so cute how Inuyasha tried so hard to take of Kagome...and did a pretty good job of it. Your characterization is wonderful.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: April 21, 2009 08:38 EDT
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I really applaud you for making Kagome realistic in not helping him to quit drinking. It's absolutely true that almost anyone who has a problem should not quit for someone else no matter how good their intentions! She wants him to find a good reason within himself and I think he realized a bit that while he was busy doing something good for someone by his own choice (not being obligated or forced) he didn't need the alcohol to fill his day!! Having said all that I thought both chapters were charming!! I loved Inuyasha going to Miroku and Sango after the bartender's advice seemed like the crap it was to him, and in this latest chapter I really loved that he put Kagome over his pride and shame at the checkout counter!! Thanks for a great read as always and I'll be patiently waiting for more, although you never disappoint because you always review pretty frequently!! Thanks again!!!
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Reviewed By: isalen44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! i love your story! really original and its so cute inuyasha looing after kagome now... serious role reversal!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 22:12 EDT
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oh that was wonderful. i dont even care that naraku and kagura were in this chapter. my mind is focused on inu yasha and kagome. fantastical! hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 21:54 EDT
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hehe Inuyasha taking care of Kagome for a change was so cute. I love how he completely forgot about drinking too. Althought that Naraku is still looming. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 20:10 EDT
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I love your story! The best part today was when Inu-Yasha walked into the wall. I could see it happening so clearly. Yeah, that was the best part!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 14:10 EDT
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O.O *faint* *gets up again* I must say that was the most fluffiest, cute scene between those two! *starry eyes* YOU are an absolutely pure genius! I love your story :D
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...if he wants to stop drinking he should ween himself off of the stuff. My uncle had a drinking problem and he was violent when he was drunk. He hit his wife...and when he was sober he saw what he had done to her And he quit cold turkey and ended up getting really sick.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 23:57 EDT
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aw! it was adorable! perfect chapter to read before running off to bed! their are a few spelling errors in the very beginning but thats all that i noticed. anywho, i loved it! definatly progressing. he likes her, hes trying to do the right thing for her, hes becoming more of a cuddly drunk and less of a hazardous (sp?) drunk. fantastic, now just hurry up and update!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: April 16, 2009 22:01 EDT
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aaaw inuyasha's last sentences soo cute! can't wait for the next chapter, and to see how naraku starts exerting himself. also looking fwd to more awkward inuyasha and kahome fluff
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wanted to reach into the story and smack Ito, though. What a self-serving jerk. I know he's in business to make money but....still. It's really trashy for him to try to manipulate a guy who's clearly in a lot of pain emotionally. Uh! And as for Inuyasha and Kagome, once again ADORABLE. But from Inuyasha's comments, she has a long way to go in convincing him that he's worth saving. I can't wait for the next one.
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