| "Guilty Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 18:33 EDT
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T^T so ubber cute!!! This IS a really freaking sweet and adorable and awesome chapter! Thank you thank you thank you! Thanks for uploading really quickly!
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 18:30 EDT
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YAY! He's finally figured it out and wants to quit! Good chapter, I loved his rection to getting a Christmas after so long of not having one. Patiently waiting for the next for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Twix2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 17:03 EDT
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Awww...what a wonderful chapter! Thanks so much for the quick update. I really liked how you created this scene- the emotions and plot were very believable and quite enjoyable to read. It was worth the wait. Now i can't wait to see what is next!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 14:54 EDT
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eeeeeh! i love it! very fluffy, but very lovely! fantastical. i love that you included the tree topper, and the blanket was ingenious... i had forgotten about her knitting... anywho, great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: transatlanticism [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 21:57 EDT
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Amazing; you really did good work in the mind of an alcholic. I'm thrilled for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 00:45 EDT
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*.* that was so freaking sweet! Yay, holidays!!! yay for cutesy moment! *bouncing off the walls* I can't wait when the truth dawns upon them! Great chapter, and very good job! Thank you thank you!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I think the smile on my face will last for a while! That chapter was great! So cute, I just hope to see the progress in later chapters that were so evident in this one, he seemed so happy! Great job!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 02:40 EDT
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TERRIFIC chapter. You did such a great job with the conflicted emotions in this chapter from both Kagome and Inuyasha, but especially Inuyasha. He just absolutely broke your heart here. He tried so hard....but you can't just get over the problems he has just like that. I love this whole story, but this is definitely my favorite chapter so far.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 01:40 EDT
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oh it was perfect! very fluffy, but hey its christmas, what more could you expect? anywho, seriously, it was great, now you need to hurry and update soon. cause i want to know what his reactions going to be when he wakes up... i hope she gets a topper for his tree... and why didnt she have any presents for him? that doesnt seem very kagome like... but maybe they're in the bag with the others and she'll bring them to him after shes done opening presents at home... i just kept hoping he'd find one from her hidden away somewhere... but like i said, update soon!
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Title: WOOOOO
Reviewed By: Jasmine1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 23:37 EDT
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Holy crow I LOVED it! It was amazing!! Too cute. Wow, i find it really funny that you updated just a few hours after I sent the review. Keep up the AWESOME work and UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 22:33 EDT
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awww that was so incredibly adorable. I love how Kagome rushes back to him and how he was so lonely without her, and then so happy she came back. The way you described their emotions was really stellar. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Jasmine1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crow I really love your story. Please update soon! I can't wait for more action. =)
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 11:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a powerful chapter! I feel bad for Kagome. It must have been so hard for her to drag Inuyasha in front of that mirror and make him face his guilt and pain knowing how much that was going to hurt him but also knowing he couldn't move forward without it. I know she's hopeful that it will be the turning point for him but I can imagine how much it hurt her to do that and how worried she is that he'll understand why she did. Then there's Inu at Kikyo's grave...what an iconic image that evoked! I can see the image of him crouching in front of the headstone...clutching onto it like an anchor, head bowed...powerful. Great writing! Lastly, YEA! He's finally forgiven himself and can start to live (and love) again. Sooo looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 07:25 EDT
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so is he dare i say it.....cured?? no more drinking?? i hope so and i hope he thanks Kagomr even though really its her job to do that but it wouldnt have happened if she didnt care for him. Well luved the chappy cant wait till the next one! -FoxyLove
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMMMMMMMMMMGGGG whats a puuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfeeeeeeeect chapter!! soo swweeet and Finally hes made HUGE progress!! Excellent chapter I like you logic in getting him to realise that its ok to life life again!! interesting twist Fingers crossed hell get better sooner! rather than later then!
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