Reviewed By: Merry-Stalker On: March 13, 2009 10:35 CDT Comment/Review: you keep referring to kagome as the soft warm body... i know youre trying to avoid saying her name but i think you need to work on your descriptive skills, using the same word or phrase over and over again is the mark of an unexsperinced writter... keep trying though, youll only get better if you keep writting...
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