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Reviewed By: Cerisin On: April 16, 2012 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did an amazing job in keeping everyone in character even in strange circumstances or stressful situations! I love the way you did Anderson's accent, its easy to understand what he's saying and its very enjoyable all the little things you did to flesh out his character. The setting of the orphanage was perfect, it gave us a chance to see Anderson in his down time and compare it to the crazy berserker mode he goes into during battle. Another thing the beginning action scenes were usually really fun to read, specially cause you never knew when Anderson was gonna send a little surprise over to Seras to let her know he was on to her. My favorite scene though has to be this one, "She was splattered in blood, and she had a speck of -he suspected intestine clinging to her cheek. God in Heaven, she was beautiful." Its the little scenes like this that really flesh out the characters and give them all the personalities and traits that we love from the anime. I loved the little snippets that kept us in touch with Alucard and Sir Hellsing, it was great to watch Alucard be his usual maddening self especially during the scene where he teases Integra about things coming full circle. I would have given you a ten on everything but I found a couple of misspelled words. ( Ch. 1 "I am the divine weapon o'God, her tae carry out his work on Earth." and in chapter six you spelled Revelled with two l's rather then one. And the final one I saw was creek rather then creak in chapter 11) Overall, you wrote an awesome fic and I'm really hoping for a sequel, so many questions arose from that ending! Just how does Alucard and Anderson get along now that they are on the same team! Much less how does Anderson get along with Integra? |
Title: ...Woah!
Reviewed By: Wicked Doll [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2010 15:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God Lord where to start. It was blasphemous, wicked, sinful and blood soaked and I loved every minute of it. I wish there had been more!
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Reviewed By: dedlit On: August 11, 2010 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just looooooove this story, it is sweet and strong and lovely and wild an soooo in character that it is even more fun to read! Your grammar is perfect and your stile is easy to read and fluently written. Well it is.... excelent in every way :) PS: Thought you might like this one http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=15&q=seras%20anderson#/d2vkc3p it is a great fanart which kinda remindet me of your story :)
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Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: June 11, 2009 16:11 EDT
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Heh, interesting, interesting. I enjoyed taking a look at this story and seeing it (currently) complete. Continue to write interesting stuff like this, and I might have more to say. Continue to update your tales, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fans self* Whew, that was one steamy lemon. Heh, gives me ideas on what to do to my husband tonight lol. j/k. Seriously though, very well done, and you still managed to keep Anderson in character. One question remains: Are we done here or is there more? PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!!! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: DWE On: June 08, 2009 22:14 EDT
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Dear God...that was hot...that was beautiful and so totally in character! Wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2009 18:01 EDT
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Y had to kill a kid, huh? *cries* poor Isabelle! I just hope that doesn't happen to my little Kayleigh. :-P Not bad on the tear jerker. Very nice, if a bit short.
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Reviewed By: socks On: May 07, 2009 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fanfic, its really interesting how you've interprited the characters. Do you plan on continuing it or was Bloodletting the last chapter? I hope not!
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I was wondering where you had disappeared to!!!!! Remember me from back in the old days when FF.Net was still a good site? Man oh man I kept hoping I'd find you again. And here you are doing a Hellsing story, of all things. Very well written I might add. I can see your writing has improved in the last few years. Nice job. If you ever feel like chatting again, my email is still relena_peacecraft16@hotmail.com. It would be nice to catch up.
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Reviewed By: DWE On: May 06, 2009 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Lord, that was hot. This just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Graypheonix85 On: April 21, 2009 03:06 EDT
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Hmmm, interesting. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: DWE On: April 19, 2009 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful and moving. I really really like it. Please, keep going. You have me hooked.
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Reviewed By: Paladins-Secret-Love On: April 10, 2009 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was very in character and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update the story soon! It's really good!
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Reviewed By: GensoHikki On: April 06, 2009 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. Your writing makes me feel like I'm there watching the whole thing unfold. Good job and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Paladins-Secret-Love On: March 30, 2009 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I am loving the idea of Seras 'Stalking' Anderson. I can't wait to see his reaction from when he realizes just who his stalker is. Please continue this I hope to see and update from you soon.
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