| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 21:53 EDT
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I want to cry right now!!!!
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Title: Oh my!
Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 20:27 EDT
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I am so glad that you are back! Thank you for brightening up an otherwise crap day!
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Title: Oh my!
Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 20:24 EDT
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I am so glad that you are back! Thank you for brightening up an otherwise crap day!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 08, 2009 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drools at sexyness* Woah! Give me some Bulma/Vegeta sugar! This is a fantastic story! I can't wait to see where you're going with this! There's only so much our beautiful Prince can take before he rams her against the cold walls!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was she going to tell him about the dragon balls? ^__^ Cute chapter! Love the way Vegeta was playing with her hair while she rambled on to him! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: sweet19bluesx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ so creative and well written~ I like the fact that its not a happy ending too :D Thank you for writing again.
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Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely adore the story so far. It is imaginative and very interesting. I really love your style of writing, because I feel it is not only mature but also absolutely captivating. I cannot even begin to tell you how much I look forward to the continuance of your wonderful fanfic.
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Reviewed By: purple_streams_of_star On: April 05, 2009 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story so much so far. I'm practically checking your account everyday to see if you've updated! haha no lies. This is getting so good, please update soon!
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: pantrieze On: April 05, 2009 02:07 EDT
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this story is absolutely amazing, very original,ive never seen a fic done like this..please upload the next couple of chapters asap
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 23:51 EDT
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OMG joygasm. I didn't realize you were writing again. Wonderful beginning, though of course I wouldn't expect any less from you. Terrified and thrilled to see what happens next.
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Title: In Love
Reviewed By: Kuroi_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my laptop got stolen leaving me with no internet. I find this while checking my email on campus. You're alive and you updated! Four chapters at that! This made my day. No, my week! I hope this is a lengthy one. YOu're making me tempted to read your other fics all over again too. This will highly cancel out the horror that the new DBZ movie will be which i am only seeing for comedic value of course. Vegeta is so talkitive and soo protective this early on. I'm glad they didn't shag yet, reading this is public is making me paranoid enough. So can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 07:08 EDT
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Loved it again. To watch them fight this together..really really interesting and also it sounds real twisted and sick..it's really fun to read too! *hungs her head in shame..never thought I'd call reading about torture fun* Anyway, good job again and I'm waiting for the next one! Lovies EV
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Title: Intriguing!
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 23:13 EDT
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Wow, I am really starting to enjoy this story. I'm disappointed at the end of each chapter, but only because it's the end. You're really leaving me wanting more story! I agree with Nintendocat- the interaction between Zarbon and Jeice IS creepy. :p
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Reviewed By: sihnya On: April 02, 2009 17:54 EDT
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This story is almost a character study of both Bulma & Vegeta... awesome !! I'm glad you updated but can't wait to read what happens.. :)
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! Poor Vegeta. I love the way he protected Bulma. Update soon! Love it!
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