| "Indecent Exposure ~ A Naruto Fan-Fic (K/I)" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatyCal95 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2010 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE more! kakairu is one of my fav pairing!! i'm starved for your story
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Reviewed By: ssecca01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2010 15:56 EDT
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This story is just perfect! I usually avoid paring stories because it's hard to find one written to a standard that I can enjoy. But this one is. No real bulky blocks of text. Flawless execution of keeping to a single POV. Great dialogue and thoughts and feelings and descriptions that draw you into the world and the relationships you're trying to convey. Overall thoroughly enjoyable! I just hope there will be more to come soon.
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Reviewed By: Juniperbreezie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 15:17 EDT
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I so love this story. I hope Kakashi will be able to prove to Iruka that he's committed to him no matter what. And what's the deal with all of the traps? That definitely sounds like a background part of the story just waiting to be told.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 07:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY for more of this great story. I loved this chapter darlin'! I can't wait to see what is revelaed in there chat next chappie.
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Title: It just keeps getting better!!
Reviewed By: kyba247 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You melted my brain with this latest chapter! OMG, this is good. You know what I like the best, though? These bits and pieces you give us of Iruka's personality and abilities in each chapter add up to someone who is more than a match for any jounin/ANBU that crosses him. Kakashi will never be bored trying to uncover all the layers that make up Iruka Umino. Again, thanks for a great read and am gleefully looking forward to your next chapter!
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Title: MORE!!
Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 22:52 EST
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FOR THE LOVE OF GOD THAT WAS SOOO KINKY! YOU JUST HAVE TO WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 21:15 EST
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It's been a long time sine a kaka Iru fic impressed me this much... I didn't give you a rating because ten isn't high enough.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was hot what a delcious chappie to follow after the hot battle!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such an awesome fight! I could see it all in my head so clearly! Great chappie darlin' :)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 21:17 EDT
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yay! you updated! Just when I had given up hope...I really like Kakashi's way of dealing with Iruka's insecurities about their relationship. As always, can't wait to read more. (ps if you like reviews you may want to undo the thing that allows only logged in members to review)
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Reviewed By: kyba247 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will tell you right now the only reason I registered an account at mediaminer.org was to review your fic. This is incredible!! Anyone who's an Iruka fan should be reading this and i can't believe you've gotten so few reviews. This story's got great characterization and OMG hot sex scenes. This is the way Iruka should be written and now I'm going to be comparing your version of Iruka to everyone elses. Seriously, you really should be listing this story on some other fanfic or Naruto based sites. You;ll have a fan following in no time!
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Reviewed By: Skittles2xtreme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 05:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iruka-sensei is delightfully as I picture him in this ditty. Subtle, sly, but oh so creative. You pegged him wonderfully. I'm frankly surprised this fic hasn't gotten more reviews. So, let me tell you, it's awesome and I can't wait to read more! I wish I had a teacher like Iruka when growing up. Maybe then I wouldn't have slept through most of my classes in Highschool. LOL XD
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 02:01 EDT
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i completely enjoyed this story, and can't wait to read more! iruka's devious/sneaky/subtle, shika and neji are actually interesting and you've got to love kaka x iru.
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Reviewed By: Juniperbreezie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just tell you that I registered on this site specifically to leave this review. I Love, I Love, Love this story!!!! It's awesome. I can totally see Iruka as an "almost genius." That last prank on the Anbu was brilliant. I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: alchemie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 02:39 EDT
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eiii! Love this story... love to see more, please :D (yes, it took me until today :) I love your Iruka !!
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