"The Miko and the Taiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2010 23:41 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, it seems like you've been through a lot and im happy you found someone. I love this story and I hope you continue with it and I thank you for continuing with your writtinq.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 14:37 CDT Comment/Review: i do feel sory for you and its so romantic falling in love on the net. when i asked u a five word question i hardly expected a doctors report. but get well soon. i'll pray for ur well being and remember this: the way to man's heart is through food so make sure to feed that fiance of yours lots of food before u get married. then afterwards thats ur choice
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Title: Canon Vs. AU Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 12:36 CDT Comment/Review: I don't review very often, but I saw something in a previous review that disturbed me. In this InuYasha Universe, there aren't ANY undone story lines. Sessylover is obviously working very hard on this story and it shows. The dialog runs fairly smoothly and makes sense, the timeline flows and the charactor's are recognizable. The attention to detail is evident. I am not an author, I couldn't spin a story to save my life, but I'm an excellent reader. I love to read, I don't ever remember not being able to read, AND I LOVE InuYasha. In the past 4 or 5 years I have read every possible story line, and charactor hookup that was impossibly possible. I have also seen Kagome changed into every type of Miko/Demon/Vampire/wherwolf/goddess/hanyou/....she even switched bodys with InuYasha, so.....she's been a male too. I have read great, mediocure, and bad fanfiction, and all of them have been a labor of love by someone who is trying out their author wings. I say "You go, Authors, being able to spin a story is a wonderful gift, so don't stop writing." Sessylover, your story is very good, the plot could use some tightening up, and as you write more, and practice more, this will happen. Don't forget that Kagome is, not only a loving gentle girl, she also has a firey temper from H**L, try not to make her too fragile, K? There, my rants over, TG. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 07:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh god. that sounds so horrible, I wish people didn't have to go threw with those things. I'm glad that you have your boyfriend, at least some thing is happening right in your life... at least because they know that you have hard the brain surgery they will keep you in the hospital because of that. The new chapter was very good. Sango just blurts it out even thought she promised!!! lol.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 00:21 CDT Comment/Review: Makes me wonder if inuyasha busted a hole in her crotch...kikyo's just a clay doll.She has no need for food (she uses souls to keep her alive) and she was only made for finding jewel shards for that witch that brought her back. she has no orgins at all. she has no sex orgins either. Remember when naraku attacked kikyo when inuyasha thougt kikyo was dead? Did you notice there was no blood and she broke like she was made of clay? Well that's all she is just clay and souls that she stole. Clay dolls can't have sex at all. And the kikyo/inu scene was very disgusting...please dont write another lemon between those two..yuck!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 15:03 CDT Comment/Review: whats wrong wid ur brain?
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 18, 2009 08:59 CDT Comment/Review: Great update yet again
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Reviewed By: kace19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 01:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a great story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 17, 2009 19:05 CDT Comment/Review: That was a quick update but thanks again
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 11:27 CDT Comment/Review: i like ur story but u need to make a few changes. and thts really sweet of u to say tht i took the time out. plus dont spend all ur time writng. it mite afect ur schhol life. divide ur time. an hour at nite
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 13, 2009 22:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay update I feel special and to thank your reviewers just send them a shout out over you fic chapter I'm sure they will get the message.
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 19:11 CDT Comment/Review: I'm so glad u updated, and I agree that inuyasha and kikyo being intimate was super gross. But I really don't like kikyo anyway. Anyway, hope u keep writing and I await ur next update :)
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: April 13, 2009 09:25 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like tyhe story but the inyuasha and kikyo doing it is just nasty i mean she's dead. So please don't put that in a character ever again ok.
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 00:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update soon! Love this story!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 23:51 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: Lol!! I'm so sorry! I reviewed the wrong story! That goes to show you there is too many sesh/kag fics. I'm usually on fanfiction...so I can cut all the weird pairings out. Your story is well...not very original. Like I said I only like Sessh/kag pairings in an AU that has nothing to do with the manga unlees inuyasha died. The manga has ended. So you gotta read it! Don't stop writing though. Although I don't mind Koga/kagome pairings. I guess It's because I like him. ^_^
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