| "Pride (In the Name of Love)" Reviews/Comments [ 120 ] |
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Reviewed By: LurkingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 06:42 PDT
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@__@ oh dear how ive missed this story DX welcome baccck~~~ *sniff sniff* T__T *tears of joy* yay Ancient Egypt O_O my senses are tingling @___@ new arch coming up? =D
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 16:03 PDT
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LOL... it sure didn't take long for Sesshomaru to recind his orders. :D Sesshomaru better be careful with those powers his oto:san has over him. *again LOL* Welcome back btw... took all my willpower not to bug you to death about updating. *grin*
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Reviewed By: Etherealmm On: August 27, 2009 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story. I just stumbled across it the other day and I haven't been able to stop reading since. Your characters are all well developed, and I especially love Sairex. I also love how you portray Naraku, I've never read a story with him like that. Your plot ideas are really original too. You truly are an amazing writer and I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LurkingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2009 05:12 PDT
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i should've read slowly....i shouldn't have gobbled up chapter after chapter....the wait..kills X_X take your time though. X_X i will survive a couple more days, reading the side stories X_X lol im tryin to wonder how much more i'll suffer when u plan to end this story X_X its too addictive to finish. Pride is my anti-drug-drug lol
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Reviewed By: LurkingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 04:20 PDT
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O.O omfg nooooooo~ not back in there again~ Sesshoumaruuuuuuuu~~~ @_@ darn it ... i so wana continue nd read chapter 101 but im goin out tonight T_T wont be able to read anymore till i come back home ~ waaah this fanfic is so addicting dude o.o
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Title: WEE chapter 100 =D
Reviewed By: LurkingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 11:58 PDT
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w00t finally reached chapter 100 =D zomg im LOVING Naraku so far XD uve twisted their personalities so subtly into things that EVERYONE would love to see these characters do without totally destroying their attributes nd attitudes XD
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 04:57 PDT
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Father, eh?... He hasn't called me that alone...since he was four years old. I believe I might have screwed this one up fairly badly... damn it. Now what? // Simple, get rid of the bitch. She has done nothing to warrent your mercy or a listening ear. She stands between you and your son/love/mate... there's nothing to discuss. Tell her she's got enough time to pack herself up and leave... and to not come back. Wipe your hands of her. Is anything she has to say worth you losing Sesshomaru over no matter how irrational he might be right now. It's up to Sesshomaru if he wants to make amends and he's not ready... nor should he be forced. People can be forgiven at a distance. The bitch probably will think she has a chance to win Toga's heart back, now that the pup is out of the castle....yeesh. Sometimes I think the only ones in this story that have any sense are Sairex and Naraku.*LOL*
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Title: nuuu wheres the rest of my post gone?
Reviewed By: LurkingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 03:43 PDT
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(so this part of my post got eaten away cuz i used a "less than" sign lol stupid html codes *shakes fist*) I have to say I love the creative twists in this story XD apart from the fact that you are an awesome author and totally know how to use words to their optimum, you have such great knowledge too. It's not just, "hey I'm going to make up stuff and make this all a fantasy thing". No O.O u've got facts in there. Totally love how u have a mix of science and fantasy. I could go on forever and praise this story but that means I wouldn't be reading it O.O I was going to post a review when I reached the latest chapter. But I got to chapter 88 and just had to post a review. O.O now~ to read on!
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Title: *dies of fun factor extremeness* (is that a word? o.o)
Reviewed By: LurkingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 03:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction truly deserves to be turned into an anime. It has more of a plotline than most animes out there. It's not just "sex sex sex let's put in a bunch of yaoi scenes together and give the fans a nice fanservice~" oh no, it has a story! And that story doesn't get old at all. Every chapter has a god damn plot to follow. No stupid fillers like the ones u get in most shows. The filler chapters in this are actually enjoyable O.O
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Reviewed By: Johnny Monroe On: August 13, 2009 16:59 PDT
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Nooo! If this somehow ruins InuTaisho and Sesshomaru's relationship permanently then Johnny will be very, VERY upset
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 14:39 PDT
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Oh squee! Imprisoning Tetsuko...whatever his name is, should be good enough to have Sesshoumaru show his mother a little mercy...I hope. That was exciting! I was wondering how you were going to manage that one. It was cooler than I could have hoped. ^_^ I do so love what you've done with Naraku. You make me want a happy ending for him. If he's a good boy, why can't he go back to the future with Kagome? They might even fall in looooove. LOL He could actually become rich and powerful without having to be a bad guy. Maybe win the lottery. LOL Sorry, I'm rambling. Great job with Kimi and Naraku. Now I'm waiting on Kouga's cure. Was Shippou ever cured? I can't remember. I'll have to go back and re-read. ^_^
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 01:59 PDT
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*does a jig* Now they MUST get to Sesshomaru before he 'acts' and unknowingly releases the creature!
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 05:34 PDT
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oh boo hoo.... /sarcasm If she was truly repentant, she'd free Toga... but alas, she still protects her own hide.
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Reviewed By: Johnny Monroe On: August 09, 2009 01:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, FFN was being a lame bucket earlier. I don't know if it's fixed yet but whatever, I'll just review here. Okay...now...oh my fucking god! Naraku's back but he isn't but he is! Hehe, glad he wants to be friends though. It would've sucked if you made him a dickwad again after all that's happened. XD
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Title: Drivel?.........DRIVEL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 12:09 PDT
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Even Drivel (as you put it) serves a purpose....it gives us a change at some breathing room, a chance to laugh, and have our blood pressure be normal for a couple of days. You don't give us much time for that in this story. Fluff serves a purpose....too much screaming at the bad guys isn't good for us older readers. I don't want to have a heart attack trying to get through the monitor to kill some idiot who's hurting one of my "babies" (although I don't think Toga and Sess would thank me for my designating them babies). Fluff is like the break between rounds in a boxing match. Necessary, so don't put it down, besides, we like it, and you never let it last too long, so don't worry about it, OK? Just do that Voodoo that you do so well, and Get Toga out of bondage.....hmmmmm.....Toga in bondage.....(wiping my chin)......where was I.....Oh yeah, free Toga, reunite the boys with their dad, and cut loose the power of the West on the Black Circle. Jormander needs to DIE!!!!!!, the Dracolich needs to confront Tenseiga again, and Kimi needs her ass beat.....repeatedly!!! She could have sent requests at any time to meet with Toga and Sess in a neutral place and develope a relationship with Sess, Toga would have eventually allowed it, I bet, but she didn't, and choose this path. For that she needs her ass beat. Maybe Kagome could do that, her powers are formidable, and not something that Kimi could easily counter. Just idea's that keep rolling around in my head. Am I thinking about this too much? I don't care....I just love this story.
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