Reviewed By: Thene On: August 10, 2009 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaah I am SO glad I came back to check this section again. This fic is so in-character and so adorable. Snake's feelings, both sad and loving, were handled really well and he came over as a believable dying old man. Sunny was great too. I'm curious as to why she calls him Epyon though... Favourite line: Eggs could be dealt with too, but in a coldly brutal way. As such, they never turned out right. Just seems to say so much so simply. ^^ (I just read your note in the reviews on your other fic too...he so does need love ;___; btw, you should so post this at mgs_fanworks or mgs_slash on Lj >> )
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