| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 11:58 CDT
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Woo, new update! And some of the drama's been resolved too! Thanks again for a great chapter (I know, not much else to say).
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 01:07 CDT
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ahh-- finally getting 'a round tuit'-- reading/catching up (laying flooring, baseboards, and trim)-- sorry! ♣ wow, stuff really happened. bad kagome and inuyasha!! doing stuff like that... ♠ so-- sephiroth/white haired guy hasn't been identified yet. =p am i to assume that the lemon (that i won't be reading) will all be in our 'reality challenged' sister's head? or are you giving her a real one? ♦ just ignore me, it's late and my joints ache. good stuff though. ♥
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Reviewed By: lanita On: October 06, 2009 16:34 CDT
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that was a horrible place to leave us hanging!! but thanx for updating, i love reading this story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki so i bursts into laughter when i read 'We had sex' and the 'i-i dont remember!' Oo god that killed me XD hmmm can we know what hair WR has or do we already know?? OOo i hope i didnt missed it >.> anyways about the teachers thing i know what you mean... like i only have 1 more week of holidays then im back to school, 2 weeks of revision and then our exams, but who the hell gives us a freaking test on the holidays?! BAHHHH!! oops sorry about that lol good luck with it =D
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Reviewed By: lanita On: September 23, 2009 15:34 CDT
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love the opening!! hehe thanx as always for updating!
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 11:02 CDT
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Ooo goodness, all these new developments! Drama really is the best category. Excitement! Romance! Sadness! Everything under one big soap opera of a boat. Anyway, thanks for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 23, 2009 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Oh no nononononono!! Kagome, you silly girl! How can you not remember! Eeeeks, this is getting more messy by the minute...but I love it!! ^^ Don't worry, college stuff can get demanding, just take your time, it's more important ^^
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 03:36 CDT
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OMG... Inu with short black hair.. no tell me it is not true... NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Well does that mean he can not possibly be the WR? huh? Is there some sort of twist?
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 13:04 CDT
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I kinda really expected this, but it's still heart-wrenching to see. This is sad. By the way, how does college seem to you? Normal college or community? I'm going to community so that I can transfer to a (rather prestigious) four-year college after two years, but I'm kinda curious to see what it may be like for someone going right to four-year. Like living in a dorm. Poll: I think that would actually be kind of called for. After all, Kikyo is the main character of this story and a lemon I don't think will be too strange. If you think it's appropriate, then go for it. :D Thanks again for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 02:17 CDT
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wow.... lots of chapters posted so close together... you will spoil me. Why is Kaggie so upset with her taking medication? I am still wondering whom this WR is. Part of me thinks it could possibly be Inu but then part of me thinks it can't be. ARGH... I look forward to reading the chapters coming up.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!! hide pills hide!! Oooo Kikyo is screwed now.. and well i like this Kikyo so do a lemon ^_____^ and i see why its your fav =P
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Reviewed By: lanita On: September 20, 2009 19:56 CDT
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a lemon with who? i hope itd be with the white rose!! thanx for updating ^^
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Reviewed By: Kawaiikekechan NLI On: September 20, 2009 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big UHOH! Wonder how Kikyo's going to react??? And yes, Kikyo lemon please :P Ive been up for 20 hours so sorry, this review is short! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 15:09 CDT
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=P i was only kidding about sephiroth, thought it'd give you a laugh =P ♣ i figured it was naraku when you said that onigumo looked just like joe/bob. ♦ when my husband was diagnosed with paranoia with schizoid tendencies and a few other things-- we discussed it and decided that it would be best to tell everyone we knew--to show we weren't ashamed of him or of his being 'reality challenged' (i made up that politically correct term). the only way to dispel the stigma of mental illness is for people to go public with their disorders! -- and for people to deal with mental illness in a rational and fair way- you're doing that with this story ;) ♥
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 13:07 CDT
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I think your subtle hints are turning up-in-yo-face. Quite frankly, though, I'm fine as long as I find out who everyone is and what's going to happen and what Kikyo regrets and ohmigod I need to know. Oh well, at least one mystery was solved with Naraku. I actually expected that, but still, it's nice to know. Thanks for the new chapter!
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