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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 12:41 EDT
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Ahhhh what an intense cliff hanger. I really liked that you updated so soon and I love how you descurbe the emotions. Keep up the awesome work! :)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhh! I want more!! Lol! Did you have to end it there? Now I really want to know what happens next. I hope Inuyasha doesn't go all full demon on kagome. He might try to mate her...wich would very,very bad. I'm crossing my fingers for a happy ending for Inuyasha and kagome. And i actually LIKE kikyo in this fic. She's so nice. Lol! I still dont want her with inuyasha. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 23:34 EDT
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aww this story is really depressing but also has an air of hope. I really like the way you describe the emotions and the way everyone deals with it. I feel like it's very realistic. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: Sorry for the doublepost
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 02:56 EDT
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Lol! I meant he did not rape kagome not kikyo. Lol! It's 2:54 in the morning...I better get to bed. Goodnight! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story! I just hope kagome will begin healing soon. She needs to talk to SOMEONE. Not sango...there are three people she could talk to miroku, kikyo or Inuyasha. I would choose Inuyasha they both need to understand that even if inuyasha WAS there she would still have been raped. Although Inuyasha should not have ran off to find kikyo for what 6 days? He did not rape kikyo naraku did. I'm very glad to see kikyo trying to help kagome. It'll take a while before they can umm...fully mate. God knows kagome isn't ready for sex not after being violently raped. I'm happy there was no bashing of the main characters. Now all we need is a happy ending. Kagome and Inuyasha deserves it.
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