| "An Innocent Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what Sess's mum wants?
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 16:31 EDT
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Really enjoying this story. I hope you continue through the birth of both of the babies!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 04:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Rin what a mean thing for Sessy to do - even though he didn't realise. I hope he makes it up to her.
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Title: Ralization
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl!! Long time!! This is a great little story! I love how you made Inuyasha explain to the pompous ass how a woman needs constant reassurance from the one she loves, specially at such important time!! Pregnancy not only does a number in the mind, and body, but hormones can really make emotions go hay wired, and as vulnerable as Rin probably feels right now, it is a good thing that at least someone understands what her needs are!! Thanks for making Inuyasha the smart, caring and sensitive guy we love to fantasize about!! Love you much!! Hugs and inu kisses: Me.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 01:13 EDT
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>=) the boy needs to learn that he can't marry a human, then turn around and use the same insults with his brother- as it makes him the hypocrite and fool. ♣ well said! ♥
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2009 16:20 EDT
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Very nice chapter. Sesshoumaru's mom was funny; 'little youkai'. You've got her down pat, Jaken as well. It was cute that she knew that Jaken would love to tell her about Sesshoumaru. I like that you had his father have faith in him. His mom probably does too and only pretends that she doesn't. Nice location, and completely staffed with humans. Weird. Hm, I wonder if we get to meet the troublemaker. Anywho, really enjoyed the chapter. Sorry that I haven't been reviewing regularly. Snow
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2009 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've heard of Inuyama Castle. It is definitely the perfect castle for Sesshoumaru-sama. I'm surprised more people haven't worked it into their stories. I certainly intend to in the future. Short and sweet little chapter to what is a very nice, short and sweet little story. I've never seen a "drabble story" before, each chapter based on a prompt theme. Well done! (Awww...Sess-Mom finally called Jaken by his name!)
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Title: Heartwarming
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are always so well written that I can always picture everything quite clearly! Loved how you incorporated the aspects of the manga so well!! Almost as if Takahashi Sensei had written this!! Thank you!!
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Title: KEEP WRITING
Reviewed By: Love_for_inu On: May 21, 2009 14:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna see what hapenes next. please continue
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Title: OMG OMG
Reviewed By: someone_random On: April 27, 2009 19:27 EDT
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Keep writing I wunna read what happenes next >< (Ok srsly what COULD happen with a naked rin and horny sesshy ^^)
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute and funny! B reading U!
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