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| "Futa Clown Girls From Beyond" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ] | Reviewed By: Knibbster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2022 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First nsfw fanfic I read and I'm kinda new at it, so take this
review with that on mind. First opinion, I really liked it. It was
pretty original and it keeps you hooked in some parts. I loved the
twist on the narrative and the fluid change on it, the fact that
they can't talk properly later explained when the transformation
takes place is also a very good detail I quite enjoyed. The
character design (as narrated) is imaginable, not very complicated
and fun. I would have liked to see some more alterations in the
body shape of the clown girls ( maybe some size difference, some
having bigger u things /u than others) but that's a nitpicking
thing of mine. If I have to complain about something It'd have to
be about grammar, there are some obvious spelling mistakes here and
there that takes you out of it, that and also sometimes it focuses
a b lot /b on the details, very much so. Which you know, I get it,
it's not easy to describe a whole room; Much less one that is full
of patterns and colorful lights inside a circus. But sometimes
overexplaining things that do not come as important later on takes
people out of the lecture. I'm not sure if it was for my lack of
experience reading these but sometimes things are not throughly
explained and are a little confusing. For example, the size of the
clown girls in question. They are often represented as small, but
given some actions they do, one can only think of them as
above-average size or at least as the same size of the protagonist.
Overall it's great. I've had a great time reading this and if
you're specifically into this you'll like it a lot.
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