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Reviewed By: calicogoldfish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 03:19 EDT
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that last chapter was intense, very well done, but is that it? i saw that it said completed, i hope you are going to continue or i might just burst from not knowing the rest
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 02:13 EDT
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Yeah sessh Is out of character. Im still reading it by the way! Lol! And nobody is twisting my arm. It's getting interesting. By the way my sister is grounded for a month! I told mom she was reading X rated stories on mediaminer and fanfiction. She is not using my computer anymore! I'm going to read your story even if I dislike Inu/rin. So keep writing!
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Reviewed By: calicogoldfish [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 01:24 EDT
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Well, first off I would like to say that this is a great story; very different and serious. I like that "grown up" aspect in Inuyasha fics. I have read way too many that are stuck in high school even though they are portrayed to be much older, but I suppose that's what happens when 14 year-olds try to write about things they don't understand, but I digress. You have some real talent and I enjoyed what i read thus far, please keep up the good work! The only thing I could critique is that Sesshoumaru is a little OOC, but, hey, that's why it's called fanfiction.
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Title: An Awestome story so far
Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I for one like the story. It's different and unusual to have the pairing but i actually like them. Please don't let 3 bad reviews stop you from continuing to write this story. As your views tell you , you have plenty of people that read it. To Lunabell and her sister.. IT IS CALLED fan FICTION... so what if the pairing are different and wouldn't happen in Rumiko's world. This is the authors imagination and if she wants to write it this way so be it. No one is twisting your arm to read it.
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Title: PLEASE READ!!!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch! Before I get hate mail from you let me tell you that my sister commented on your story not me. I've got to agree on the Inu/rin pairing....It's a BAD pairing. Sesshoumaru would kill him because he's courting rin. Sessh is not her father and he never treated as such. Fathers do not give their children fancy komonos back then. Inuyasha waited three years for kagome and he's matured a lot over the time they where togather. he loved kikyo and you have to understand it was hard to let her go. But he had to so he could have a life with kagome. He has far more honor then to run off with rin and rut with her in the woods somewhere when he's married to kagome. It just doesn't seem realistic to me. But I'm not telling you to stop writing. Your grammer and spelling are pretty good! Yor style of writing is nice too. But the story isn't original...and I didn't enjoy it. I like both kagome/inu and kagome/sessh stories. But I'm pickey with Kagome/sessh stories. My sister is a...really MEAN commenter. But she means well. I'm sorry if either I or my sister offended you. I'm going to have a long talk with that girl! Maybe you should put your story under AU or Divergence.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 15:47 EDT
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Lol! He wouldn't mess around with rin either! Sessh would kill him. I could see rin wit sesshoumaru rather than Inuyasha. Even kohaku or shippo would be a great match. But inuyasha? Hell no.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
If she called it quits on their marrage...she'd be stone to death. And sesshoumaru is not going to take her. She's a married woman after all! And back then there was no such thing as divorice. Your turning kagome into a whore! It's a discrace to RT and the characters. The best and only Kag/sessh fic is and always will be Tales from the house of the moon. Blec! I can't believe I read this. It seems when it come to Sessh/kag fics there is no originality in them at all. Inuyasha is either evil, abusive and trying to kill kagome so kikyo could be alive ( wich would never happen) or he died and went to hell with kikyo.(again it would never happen) I want to see something ORIGINAL. Not copies of other ideas and stories(wich NONE of them where good). And not a continuation of the manga. I like sessh/kag stories but, only if there good. And by the way to take a married women back then would be a huge discrace on you and your family. And you know sesshoumaru would not want to be a discrace to his father. With that being said...I do hope you keep writing...just on another story. I hate to be so harsh but...it's the truth. The best sessh/kag stories are AU that have nothing to do with the manga or the anime.
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