Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Umm, well, You're a good writer but there is nothing to place it in this category and it does not have enough content for people to want to read it yet. It only briefly mentions Kurama and so if you want more readers you might want to change the rating down some and then change it later when you get the explicit content in it. Your a good writer but this does not seem like an actual fanfiction yet. It seems too incomplete. I'm curious what your plans are for the next chapter. Good luck though and don't give up, ok.
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