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| "Desperation" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: love it!
Reviewed By: lucy73 On: June 19, 2009 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love it! i just read it all and it took me over an hour lol, but i loved it so much! hope you update soon, can't wait to find out more about shadara!
| Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love your fic! lol i just read the whole thing in one sittingXP couldnt get myy eyes peeled off the screen...and now tey kinda hurt...lolXP i love it it=) cant wait for the next chapter and i love how you update so oftenXD keep up the good work=)
| Title: You rule.
Reviewed By: Caseface On: June 15, 2009 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I'm so stoked on the future chapters! I've bookmarked your story and everything. Keep going! Super stoked.
| Title: darkil
Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
needs a little work on editing spelling, but everyone makes errors LOL, other then that, I love it! Thou plz change the status from complete, cause that kinda disappoited me when I saw that with the last chapter thats up, then I realized alot of ppl do that on accident, nvr would have thought of the idea for miroku, gotta agree with my goddess there (she IS splendent isn't she?) LOL I'm really curious now what Fawn and the rest of the Americans are about.. Hmm, oh, and btw when shippo first said he heard Sango say it was fawn calling I thought he was just messing up on saying fone call, LOL, it would be his first time hearing the word after all. Really enjoyed reading this one, only reason I didn't give it a ten in enjoyment is that I only give them to the gods of writing (or if I'm not paying attention when rating, LOL) but u r really good, and I really hope u continue also, kinda seems like there is an emotion theme to the Americans, is that on purpose, well I guess seriousness is debatable as emotion, it could be like fullmetal alchemist with the swven deadly sins only instead be the seven deadly emotions LOL, happiness, shyness, seriousness and wrath... Oh wait, wrath is one of the sins LOL my bad, and that kinda sounded like the 7 dwarfs when I wrote it out, all we're missing is doopy ^v^ anyway, if they r demons (which its kinda obvious they are) then they r way to open with that fact unless they know about kagome's secret somehow. Another thing is all the "aunt" and "sis" and "mama" is starting to freak me out LOL, yd u have to make them so family oriented? I've nvr heard Shippo call Kagome moma once outside of fanfics, anyway, looking forward to the next one!
| Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story. Can't get enough. Looking forward to next chapter..
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 19:01 CDT
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Hmmm...noticed a little discrepancy since in chapter 7 Kagome already voiced her concern that the well might be closed, realizing it was possible because of what Shippo had said, and then you had her go and completely freak out when Inuyasha told her. But other than that, really like the new chapters! I never thought about the possibility that the things Miroku sucked up were really entering his body, but that does make sense since taking in poison would always hurt him. If you count the movies as canon (which is debatable), then there's extensive proof of this when he sucked up all those zombies in the third movie and his arm turned purple and dead looking. If sucking in death in the third movie can affect him, then sucking in an immortal soul in the second movie would surely affect him as well. Nice idea!
| Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 20:40 CDT
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FALLS ON MY ARSE LAUGHING * its about bloody time koga got and hojo got the hint , I found your story this morning and have read everything till chap 12 I trully like this one , and look forward to future chapters
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 05:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* Koga ran off with his tail between his legs LOL and hmmm blackwolf?? i wonder what she will do..
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...then maybe we have seen the last of Hojo, but I can't wait to see what happens with Koga now! Too little too late, wimpy wolf! They're already mated, even if they haven't mated yet, and Inuyasha is tip-top to kick his ass if needed, too. This is getting really good, really fast. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just when Koga comes! damn i sooo wanna read more XD n'aww yay for Rin!!! and HAHAHAHA i pissed myself! Rin had to corner him! LOL
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2009 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a dramatic start to what will surely be a great story. Something tells me we haven't seen the last of Hojo, and once Inuyasha is fully recovered comedy is sure to ensue when Kagome tries to teach him about modern technology. They both already know the well is sealed but are afraid to tell the other person, that's cute. I love stories where Kagome and Inuyasha end up in her time and a "future-Sess" is there to help them out, and I can already tell that yours is going to be fairly different from the others. Young Shippo being added to the equation is new, for starters, as well as her friends finding everything out so quickly. Very original. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2009 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahahahaha! i can just see Sesshy giving Hojo that look now XD
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm interesting ^____^
| Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it.....Can't wait for more. Looking forward to your next update.
| Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2009 17:00 CDT
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wow!
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