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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: LadiPisces [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa nice story man l couldn't stop reading it plz update soon ASAP
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 18:42 EDT
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About fuckin time he desides to leave Naraku i mean if it would have took any longer rin would have to walk in on him being raped. Jakotsu was a suprize i serouselly thought hed rap Sesshoumaru but he didn't that has to telll you something. Now i defently can wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: leta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 17:23 EDT
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and i'm sure i'm not the only one who appreciates you writing so quickly! and i'm agreeing with about everyone else-naraku needs to die, slowly and painfully. >< this chapter was as good as any! love your work
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: leta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 15:46 EDT
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This story just gets better and better-i'm literally sitting on the end of my seat! write more-fast please! lol, it's a great story and i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2009 22:07 EDT
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Damn i what to go in your story and kill Naraku. I love tha story is painfule to read but its good.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 23:56 EDT
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TACK HIS ASS TO CORT SESSHOUMARU! Or InuYasha can just kill him ether way works for me. When is Sesshoumaru going to relize that Naraku is fucking Jakotsu? have to say they desirve each other. Jakotsu would like geting beat -_-. Set Sesshoumaru free! thanks for the new chaps loved them.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 16:02 EDT
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Thanks for the update ii loved it. But i what yo i know a few things: one. will sesshoumaru get a devorse? Will he keep Rein? When will him and InuYasha get to gether? And most inportently, WHAT the HELL is wrouge with sesshoumaru is he going to die T-T dont kill him. im not made just worndering cuz i love this story so much. ^-^ keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 13:15 EDT
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Poor Sess, he needs some good InuYasha lovin!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: leta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 16:37 EDT
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I LOVE this story. it has a great plot and i enjoy reading it. keep it up! it's awesome!!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 08:26 EDT
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Yay a new chapter. I love this story. Its kind of hard for some one as emotional as me to read but its just to good i just can't stop. I cant tell you how much i have cried foir Sesshomarus pain. I have the say its preaty relistic. It hurts my haert to know there are pepole who go though this stuff. I know im a wip in many was. i just can wait till Sesshomaru get away from that ass of a want-to-be man. Do me a Faver and have so one kik Naroku's ass for the pain he coused Sesshomaru. I eould love to read avout him being the one in a blooded mess with someone enjoying his pain. Thats just what i want to see it's your story write it how you want. Ill look forwored to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 00:10 EDT
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I'd totally take a hit out on that stupid mother fucker. Red eye the bitch and dance on his cold lifeless body.... I hear that can be great revenge and if you're good you can get away with it. I can see InuYasha being connected to the Yakuza or better yet Miroku! I mean he's not really IN the story, he could have a shady kinda job....right? Anyway! Those were some great chapters. I'll wait patiently for then next and maybe even work on mine while I'm at it. ^.^
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Title: luvininu28
Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 14:20 EDT
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Your fic is wonderful!! It breaks my heart for Sesshomaru! What's sad too is that your description of abuse like that is so true!! Psychological abuse is absolutely terrible and when you give yourself away like that and let someone else have control over you, it's just awful. Your story makes me ache for Sess to finally stand up to Naraku and leave him. He's already proven he can be the stronger of the two when he wants. I love your story. Don't feel too bad about the lack of reviewing either. I wrote a story a year ago and just got my first review this year ha ha but the story has been viewed over 600 times so it just shows that people do read the story but maybe they don't know what to say about it. Anyways, keep up the great stuff and thanks for a great read!!
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why am I the only one to review??? That's just not right!! I really like these couple of chapters. Really like how Inu and Sessho keep questioning their feelings yet keep doing things that bring them closer together. Keep up the great work. Oh...TOTALLY love what you did with Kouga. I could really see him and Naraku ending up together...and completely happy with their twisted relationship.
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be the first to review!! Yea me!! I'm really liking this fic. Never really read a Naraku/Sessho fic where he was docile like this. He's always fought back hard core. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. One thing I think is a little over done in this is all the gay men. I love m/m, but it kinda bugs me when it seems that every male is gay! That does tend to put a lot of readers off. I love the concept of your story, so happy writing.
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