| "Heart of the Cards, Guide Me" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah. Little number thingys... right. You get a 10.
a nine for the Mary-Sue junk, but that's better than just 3 frickin' reviews, right?
Dang "Panda Love".... too sucky for people.... |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ha! Finally read it! Hoo boy... I just read all the chapter beginings and I'm already an expert...
I read the note at the end and I was like "Heart of the cards? I always make fun of the Heart of the cards by saying Herd of the Terds or something!"
Anyways... I read the reviews, and I'd have to say that this has a plot. My fanfics don't. Generally meaning, your Mary-Sue is better than all my Yugioh fics.
Sure you say mine are 'hilarious' and junk, but I'd really like to try and make a plot for this web page.
I've got one but... too cheesy. It was my Panda Love one, and I had to change it around so it wouldn't be too Anny/Yugi like. It originally had all the Sakura and Madison comments in it, so it's not all that dif from the original, I guess.
Ack, you got 13 reviews... i've only got 13 put together from three of my fanfics... I'm horrid. *eats another M&M* Haaa.... good fic. I'm too lazy to read anything else than just this one.... -_-0 can't.... move.... arm..... keyboard.... gimpy.... ack... |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 15:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gomen! I'm really sorry, but my computer's not that good, so I accidently sent the same review twice! SORRY! |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 15:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to mention something. You didn't use the word "ironic" correctly. What's the irony in Sakura saying the same words as Joey in chapter 7? The word you're looking for is "coincidential," not "ironic." |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 15:14 CDT
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I forgot to mention something. You didn't use the word "ironic" correctly. What's the irony in Sakura saying the same words as Joey in chapeter 7? The word you're looking for is "coincidential," not "ironic." |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fiction and especially the main character isn't very creative. I'm sick of having the main character be basically the author who is "the poor, pitiful one" and turns out to be so, sickeningly special. But I am a sucker for happy endings with everyone being matched up, so I liked the story's ending. And please don't yell/cuss at me for not liking the Sakura character. |
Reviewed By: SAJ On: August 30, 2002 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story. It was super cute!!! It was enjoyable, interesting, FANtastic, and very original. (I hope I spelled all of those correctly)! Please write a sequel!
The only thing I didn't like was the fact that there was too little Joey and Bakura. Oh well. Guess I can't have everything. . . :) |
Reviewed By: Li's Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2002 14:55 CDT
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Wow! Write a sequel please. Why did you have to have Yugi and Sakura die at such a young age. Okay so 60 isn't young, but some people die like 10- 25 years later. At least my grandperants. 88 and 87 and is anything bothering them, besides the fact my grandpa lost his leg when he was 53? Nope. See ya. |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok now it all makes sense... thankz for writing me! |
Reviewed By: krazy_kitty_katz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luv it!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! You told me to read and i'm glad i did!! Keep it up!! WRITE MORE!! PLEASE!! The suspense is killing me!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 -youknowme! =) |
Reviewed By: dos_bytes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
its good so far!!! plz keep going! |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooo i read it again and its sooo good |
Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just wow. Really wow A very good story with lots of potential. Keep writting. |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooo its really good. even though i only kinda understand it... but its really excellent. |
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