| "Retrieving Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 09:51 CDT
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Thank you for updateing! ok this was hot and sexy and just yum. i cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon im dikeing to know what happens next. This is so exsiting!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 21:55 CDT
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Sex! ok that was good i loved it. Can't wait to seee how everyone reacks to there darks.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 15:22 CDT
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Yay new chapter. I'm so excited to see what happens. I get so in to storis its scary. Im tring to figer out who IXM is in the paring. can you tell me im loosing my mine by not knowing cuz there a main paring. If it's some secrent then i'll what and find out if not tell me please. Can't what for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm liking this,keep going! it's starting to sound like a great read, but spell check a bit more,there were a couple lines that didn't make sense
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 18:10 CDT
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Frist to reveiw, I feel specil ^-^. I like it is so far. I was freacking out at frist when there was no Malik. I was wordering how u where goiing to pull him in to it. I like that Peguses is a good guy in this. I am asuming that his wife was the cild that got away? I'm not shore how I'd feel being older then my past life parents. Acualy I'm shore I'd still act like there child. But I'm wierd like that so it's expected. I'd be happy if you up date soon. Tatnk you for your time.
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