| "Retrieving Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 21:31 CDT
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This was such a cute chapter. i love it. i hope marik is next. update soon.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 14:28 CDT
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loved the chapters they were very good. Bakura is mean but you just have to love that about him. update soon.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm in love with your story! I'm already wondering what happens next~ Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2009 00:21 CDT
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Yay drama! this will be funny> up date soon
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 11:37 CDT
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FREEEDDDDOOOOOMMMM! ok now that almost everyone is free i guessing the evilpeople will start sowing up. they will not win *giggle*. up date soon.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 07:14 CDT
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The plot is coming in i see but i have to say that i like the sex alot more but i guess ill whait for more boy on boy love. Cant whait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 19:28 CDT
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Yum a hot sexy threesome. usually dont like those but i injoyed this one greatly. Update soon.
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Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: kainnobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was really getting into this story, when all of a sudden.. it was gone... Why me... *cries* Anyways, you list that there are 23 chapters. Are you done already with this story? If you are, where is the rest of it! I really wanna finish it. It's so exciting! Pllease hurry and post again.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 16:25 CDT
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woho seth! love seth not my fav but love him anyway. love that we get sex got to love it. update soon.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 11:22 CDT
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Yay new chapter. please update soon im dieing frome waiting. ok love the chapter would have like to know how dartz got him out the tent but allwell. I hope Jono wont freak oo much when Seth comeout. well thats it, love the story can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 09:51 CDT
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Thank you for updateing! ok this was hot and sexy and just yum. i cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon im dikeing to know what happens next. This is so exsiting!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 21:55 CDT
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Sex! ok that was good i loved it. Can't wait to seee how everyone reacks to there darks.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 15:22 CDT
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Yay new chapter. I'm so excited to see what happens. I get so in to storis its scary. Im tring to figer out who IXM is in the paring. can you tell me im loosing my mine by not knowing cuz there a main paring. If it's some secrent then i'll what and find out if not tell me please. Can't what for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm liking this,keep going! it's starting to sound like a great read, but spell check a bit more,there were a couple lines that didn't make sense
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 18:10 CDT
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Frist to reveiw, I feel specil ^-^. I like it is so far. I was freacking out at frist when there was no Malik. I was wordering how u where goiing to pull him in to it. I like that Peguses is a good guy in this. I am asuming that his wife was the cild that got away? I'm not shore how I'd feel being older then my past life parents. Acualy I'm shore I'd still act like there child. But I'm wierd like that so it's expected. I'd be happy if you up date soon. Tatnk you for your time.
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