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| "PITCH" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: tired....zzzz...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 24, 2009 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I can safely say that I diden't see that coming. I think that I'm so used to L being parinoid about kira, so much so that I forget that this is AU so he dosen't have to be. I'm sorry to make this short (I had to type that 3 times b4 I got it right, ha! ^^') but I just got done with my first day of college so I'm a little drained... I will say this though, I did think that it was maybe a tad OOC of L to jump into bed with Light, though I do belive the AU is to blame for some of the akwardness, I still think he may have been pairinoid over the detective bit, not to mention the previouse "rejected" kiss. ...Don;t mind me too much, I'm not totally with it right now if my typing is any indication, (it took me 4trys to spell is! grrr) I'll come back another time and reread this when I'm less out of it. I may be underestimating L as a charater as well, (for he's not TOTALLY socially inept) Here's going to bed ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 11:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aww L is cute. He fell for Light without even knowing it.
| Title: Awww, poor L :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 19, 2009 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It never ceases to amaze me how logically stupid Light can be. I find it both amuzing and at times, terribly fustrating ^^' I havta wake up early tommorow so I'm sorry that this is so short. I can't wait to see what happends next! {Though if Light were smart he would have realized his blunder and ran after our dear insomnic. Tch, Geniuses! ;p } ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: Deathnotelover On: August 15, 2009 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the how u have L stepping out of his comfort zone and how light just keeps staying one step a head of him. i love the story! keep writing i cant wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Irony :3
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 12, 2009 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was half expecting L to go up and ask to borrow a pen, much like Light did, and then I began to think of the weird crazy things he would do with said pen....all of which were unlikely and some very much impossable. ---I love Irony, and I do belive Irony loves L. You always seem to have a good bit of it where he is concered, though it mostly manafests as him being a bit of a hypocrite (the whole expanding of the mind); I find it funny as it always with logic that he's able to do a 180 ;p Im looking forward to when L gets some of his own back at Light, (and we all know he will or else he woulden't be much of a challenge ;3) As always, here's waiting for the next chapter, till then! ~Passing Reader ---PS. Is it sad that I liked the Inspector Gadget senerio you painted? lol
| Title: More? Please?
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 28, 2009 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could write a 110 in enjoyment factor I would :p I now find that I don't want to read anyone elses DN fics but yours! I think I'm even more fascinated with this story than I was with the last one (though both hold a certian charm for me). I love it, plain and simple ;p Thanks to both you and your beta! You guys do magnificent work so please keep it up! As usual you nailed the characters and have captured my heart all over again :D Here's eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Frist to reveiw. I win. Ok I'm try to stop being weird. I love this story it's so funny how worked up L got over a pen. He hates loseing huh? I'm not supried that Light could piss him off though. L being social is a weird consept but intertanig. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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