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| "Do What You Have to Do" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: In Hopes For A Bright Inu-Future
Reviewed By: komotumushi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 08:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read and re-read your story several times and I must say, I do enjoy it so. I hope you update it soon, but I will not rush you, as in turn, it is your story. However, I must say that I cry everytime I read it, as Inuyasha seems to be more and more dejected. I fear for the first time, I am actually so engrossed in a story that I find little time to read others. I have tried, but it feels as if I am betraying this story when I read. It is an overall great story to begin with. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are always my favorite pair. However, it would seem more fitting for Sesshomaru to finally get a bit in the mouth so he can be reigned in. Poor Inuyasha is all but a shell of his former self and I do hope in time, that fire within him will burn brighter than ever before,(and here is to hope) finally bite Sesshomaru in the butt. Tai-youkai or not, no mate should be left to rott in their own self-loathing. If it were up to me, Sesshomaru would be left alone, cold, and broken, realizing in the end what he had done was wrong and that Inuyasha was speacial. However, SHAME ON YOU for making Inuyasha believe in the words of a foul mouthed Inu-youkai woman who, in truth, didn't deserve to be who she was. Boy, do I hate Sesshomaru's mother. Not only that, you are slowly making me have a loath-love relationship towards my Sesshomaru costume, as I play Sesshomaru at almost every cosplay-con I can. Opps, I am rambling again. Your story has many elements I enjoy exploring in the depths of my mind and I do hope, in time, that these dark clouds will soon pass over and Inuyasha will once more have a smile. Your's Truley Komo of the Fox Tribe
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Reviewed By: Shivonne aka ladytokyo On: June 12, 2010 03:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I want to know if life gets better with Sesshomaru. now that my whining is out of the way how are you doing? Whats going on with you hope you are having a good summer so far.
| Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 20:42 PDT
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the ending was very lovely. love the story.
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 14:57 PDT
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Another extraordinary chapter. Poor Inu it seems like he has given up (there seems to be no fight left in him)- I hope it is just the pregnancy and that once he pops he will get a little bit of his old spunk back. Sess really seems to be trying hard, but as far as I can tell he really has not done anything to warrant Inu's forgiveness (an evening of decent behavior does not count for much), he has tied Inu down to a life as a breeder (just like a puppy mill) and taken away his freedom. Inu was brash, loved the outdoors and loved to fight, he has not been able to indulge in anything he likes (other than being with his children)for years. Sess better start thinking of ways to make Inu truly happy and also find a way to keep Inu from becoming pregnant every time he goes into heat, otherwise there will eventually be hundreds of puppies running around the castle! I really do not see how much longer Inu can last in his perpetual state of melancholia. I also hope you start to reverse some of Inu's forced feminization, I think that once he can act a little more like a man he will start to feel better!
| Reviewed By: biglaugher113 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im not usually a Pov reader (seriously i hate those fics) but yours is just wonderful. you write it so that it is so interesting. Please update soon im looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Manda001 On: March 19, 2010 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Again, I light up when I see a new update!! I did like this chap, glad you didn't delete it, and I think it's a nice little slice of daily life. I'm dying inside for Inu, and wanting to beat the crap out of your Sesshomaru (but isn't that the natural way?). It's killing me that Inu seems kinda broken, not the fighter anymore, but I respect your vision. Please keep writing! This premise and narrative style is great!
| Title: I'm ready to see the up side just any time now lol
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 19, 2010 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ended up reading this one a whim and rather enjoyed it. As always there is the expected angst, but you make it the plot for this story, which, while interesting, has me crying for Inuyasha lol. Sesshomaru is an asshole, I have no idea how your going to have him make it up to our poor Inu, so I wish you the best of luck in that regard *laughs* It does seem that his oldest son maybe catching on as well, and I have to wonder what his reaction will be should he get involved! This has been a very interesting read and I look forward to more so please continue to share! Here's waiting for the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 18:57 PDT
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YA! Update! Everytime I read this I just feel so sorry for Inuyasha. He loses Kagome, he feels he'll never have children then, bam!, Sesshomaru. Then he adjusts to having a son, lives his life well enough then, bam!, Sesshomaru again. Then all the peace he's had is just gone, he locked away, cooped up, and forced to stay with someone who, while they are related, don't know one another. So essentially he's now in a loveless marriage. Sad.
| Reviewed By: Toni (anf600) On: March 19, 2010 17:47 PDT
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Poor Inu - I feel so bad for him. Constant pregnancy can't be good for him especially when he is so depressed. When will Sess stop being an ass and start paying real attention to Inu??
| Reviewed By: CrazyYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Ok. i've had dreams that i got a new chapter for this fic. and finally my dreams have come true! Oh ok. talking is good. explaining why your unhappy is good. Things can start to get better now. and maybe a visit from shipo will help. or, oh want InuYasha to be happy again. but know with so much pain and hurt that he has gone threw it will take time. Yay for open minded deamons accepting slight human blood. I know since you just updated tonight i'll have a long wait agian till the next instalment. but looking forward to it. happy fan. CrazyYasha.
| Reviewed By: WhinnieRichards On: March 04, 2010 02:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
True, it is getting dark but that is exactly what makes this story so beautiful. I'm usually not a fan of angst but you created it so wonderfully that I've just become completely caught up in the story. Great Job.
| Reviewed By: CrazyYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 17:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first i hated you for makeing inuyasha a transvestite. but you wrote your story so well. even though i was screaming at the screan that i didn't like you... i couldn't stop reading.. and now that i've calmed down after a few chapers and have gotten the idea wraped around my head that this 'could' happon. i started to enjoy the story more and more.. now i'm so attached i need to know what happons next. i love the story. and hope with due time and undersandable awequardness. inuyasha and sesshomaru and learn to not be so agrivating to eachother. and maybe the son can help be the go between, litening and saying the words they need to say to eachother until they finally get the courage and say those things themseves. and the next heat can be enjoyable. i'm just hoping. i'm interested what will happon next. and loveing every sentence. looking forward to where your going to take it. new fan. CrazyYasha
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 15:34 PST
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Sorry no words - too upset - Inu pregnant again!
| Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 25, 2010 08:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am so sad and angry all at the same time. Sad because Inuyasha is loosing everything that makes him the wild, caring, strong, loyal, and awesome person he is. I'm angry because of Sesshoumaru. IF (and I am waffling if I believe it or not) he cares about Inuyasha, he is sure showing it in a craptastic way. If he cares as much as Ai is leading us (not inu) to believe, then he needs to tell INUYASHA. I could just stomp on his foot. I keep trying to tell myself that perhaps the tea was dangerous for Inuyasha or something like that and Sess was trying to help him. BUT HE ISN'T. GRRRR. All in all, I really am enjoying this piece because it it making me go through a whole range of emotions in so little time. Huzzah!
| Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 07:59 PST
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thats really depressing. Sesshoumaru need to do something qiukly before InuYasha is broken beyond repare. dont get me wronge i love the story. the realisticness is scary but that is also why i love it.
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