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Reviewed By: Sunrise On: December 21, 2009 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-.- You had to make it a dream. You just had to. Haha. I'm glad you aren't going to give up. Too many authors on MM have given up on their stories, leaving many readers sorely disappointed, especially if the story is getting to the good parts. Hopefully, you will not become one of those authors and finish the story. ^.^ Looking forward to that next chapter, cause i have no clue what's going to happen. n.n
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Title: Reviews
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 11:40 CST
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Don't give up writing a story because the people reading your story haven't reviewed. For some reason, the readers at MM (like myself, speaking for myself) feel stupid leaving a review saying "Good chapter, can't wait for the next", I feel embarressed saying that cause it makes me sound mindless. I am thouoghly enjoying your story, and I really can't wait for the next chapter. The story explores Inu and Kag from a slightly different angle than is usual, and I really enjoy that. I am very particular about the stories I read, but very tongue-tied when telling why. I am no author, I leave that to you guys, and you never fail to delight. I am well on my way to being completely disabled, and the one joy I have is reading fan fiction. These stories you budding authors post for our parusal are like food to me, they keep me going, but sometimes it is painful to type, so don't let the lack of reviews faze you, some times it is because I don't know what to say, and sometimes becuase it hurts to much to say it, but I will always try to respond to author distress. Keep an eye on the reader count, it will let you know who has found your wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasps* i wanted more!! OMG!!
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Reviewed By: Suzumi-chan_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the chapter...it's also my birthday and this is one of the greatest birthday presents ever...seeing an update to one of my favorite stories...More plz!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: October 17, 2009 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to read this again seen that i havent been near my emails... but nawwww Iunyasha and Kagome are finally friends :P
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a second there, I thought Inuyasha was going to lose track of time, and then Kagome would suddenly hear his dad shouting vilely to know why his disgusting being was still in their house, when he was ordered to make himself scarce for their dinner guests lest they vomit at the sight of him. That would've definitely been a wake-up call for Kagome, but I guess it's just not time for her to know yet, and in a way I'm kind of glad her comment broke the spell and got him off the phone, because at least now we can assume he got out of the house before he would've gotten himself in trouble. I also like how you're hinting that slowly but surely, Sesshoumaru might not be such a prick to him, if Rin keeps managing to worm her way inside the layer of ice around his heart. Loving that Sess/Rin side-story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad Inuyasha is softening up. Can't wait to read more....
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 07:18 CDT
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i love this story!!! if only you could update more often... but i totally understand how much of a killer school can be so i guess i'll just have to be patient!!XD but seriously this story is Addicting!! keep up the good work^^
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Reviewed By: inukag4ever18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing chapter. I love how you had Inuyasha going from frustrated over the Kagome getting kissed by Hojo to completely forgetting about his own anger with his concern over Kagome. Please update soon cause this has become one of my favorite fanfics. Keep up the excellant work
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: August 16, 2009 20:51 CDT
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WOW what a twist! i thought when the chapter said Kiss i thought it was going to bewteen inuyasha and kagome, man that gave me a run for the money. nicley done! XD. man the whole situation bewtten them in this chapter is scary, kagome has know idea that inuyasha likes her that much.... well it could just be all confusing for them but what do i know ;, hehe, but please please update as soon as possible PLEASE XD!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! It's rather similar to another modern day fic on here somewhere, where InuYasha is actually physically abused by his father, but you definitely explore the concept with your own originality. I also love this because it's a modern day fic where InuYasha lives sort of like he actually did in the manga, instead of being some rich, buff, womanizer that people like to make him out to be. He seems canon, even in a non-canon setting, it's great! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter (Transformation). Although it was a short chapter, i still enjoyed it. (:
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Reviewed By: InuyashaKagome4lyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
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The story is great so far, but I'd really like for you to remember that when a new character speaks, their dialouge must ALWAYS be on a new line. Anyway, like I said, your story is great. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha got hurt but at least he stood up to his dad. Good for him. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!! Absolutly love it!! Tee hee! I haven't read a fic like this where Inuyasha's Dad isn't the greatest and it's something fresh. Keep updating! As long as you update i shall continue to review!
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