| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2011 14:05 PST
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Enjoyed the update! Love seeing the plot move along with the cops. You've really endeared me to them. What happened at Bulma's house? Uh oh... |
Reviewed By: okieday17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 14:21 PST
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Glad to see Bulma getting some of her old spunk back! I am loving this story-- definitely a different approach to Bulma/Vegeta, but anything you write with them in it is most excellent! |
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 05:10 PST
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Great chapter! I love how Bulma felt comfortable enough with Vegeta to take that move. I mean it couldnt have been easy for Vegeta seeing as how he's always been the dominant one right? Thanks for the chapter and hope to read more soon! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! |
Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Shisha On: January 29, 2011 03:34 PST
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Beautiful sex scene, i love the power Bulma displayed in this chapter, it was like with each blow she gave Vegeta she was gaining back her strength... |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 04:09 PST
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I felt jolts of currents running up and down the back of my hips and waist as I read this. Electrifying. Fuuuuuuuuuu-- The violence and sex intermingled perfectly in this chapter, considering where Bulma is in terms of recovering from her trauma, and Vegeta being the cold prince who slowly shows her his softer more caring side. |
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: January 26, 2011 15:21 PST
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Ohs muh Gods! That was such an intense chapter, my skin tingled when I got down to the sex scene. Like I've said before, you're an absolutely amazing writer. Thanks for another chapter!! |
Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2011 12:50 PST
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Eeek! I never reviewed! I'm so sorry. I read up to Chapter 13 all at once --- it was incredible! I love your characterizations and the story telling is wonderful. I loved the new chapter as well. It makes perfect sense that she would need a way to vent off all that anger. I liked the way it came about. I like how Vegeta is helping/protecting her but still has his tough attitude. I like the slow burn of his change towards her; you can tell he'd still rather his life hadn't changed and he was training and having nothing to do with her, but at the same time resigned to this new development in his life. I loved the way he trained her. Sorry if I'm rambling, the kids--- aah! They're so distracting me. lol. Anyway, loving the story. Thanks for sharing it! |
Reviewed By: wingedkiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2011 09:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Please write more! I really enjoyed reading this story for the last couple of days! :) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2011 21:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it that Vegeta is teaching bulma how to fight. I think it is a necessary part in her healing process. Contrary to the last reviewer, I didn't think that this chapter was sloppy at all. As always I enjoyed it, and I am glad to see that they finally got together. Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Sarita123 On: January 25, 2011 13:14 PST
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don't know what to think about the last one(chapter 14). not quite like I imagined it too happen, kinda sloppy to me. but hey you are the writer, and that just my opinion. you still write the best V/B. :) |
Title: The Trouble with MM.org
Reviewed By: Precious (NSI) On: January 20, 2011 02:57 PST
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I do hope you are feeling better. According to "catgirl26" it has been messing up for a while now. I confess it has been a while (probably years..) since I've tied to load anything but she has a story she is working on right now so it's not just you. Oh and just in case I forget when I get ready to do a real review; I'm not usually found in this section. I used to be in the "InuYasha" crowd but I do love DBZ. Trunks and Vegeta were always my favorite. Alas, not many people can do the characters justice but you have always had the magic touch when it came to writing Vegeta/Bulma. What's even better you understand all the characters enought to play around with them and make them believable! I'm not sure if anyone other than you will be my fav of this section. I have several of your stories saved so I can read them at my leisure. You have truly ruined me for other B/V fics, for yours is the standard in which they are measured. Precious (Sorry I didn't sign in. Pure laziness on my part. My link is attached to the story "Meant To Be" if you require contact info. ) |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 05:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew, finally got off my lazy ass and got an account on mediaminer. :) I've been following this story on FF but I just wanted to say here just how awesome it is! I love how you portray Vegeta, especially Bulma. You're amazing. ^_^ xxoo |
Reviewed By: shibalover On: January 17, 2011 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, love, love it! Can't wait for more! Your work actually kept me up at night, with a million and one thoughts going throught my head! Please don' t stop! I have to know how this one ends! It will drive me crazy if there is no end! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: January 16, 2011 07:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm always blown away by the detail in each chapter. I can totally see you writing a romance/suspense novel, and I would be one of the first to buy it! |
Reviewed By: LazyA On: January 13, 2011 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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I like your style of writing, your stories are my favourite V&B drug! the last chapter is really good, your writing is exceptional, and oh the details are great! but not I am not a big fan of crime/cop stories, and i don't really want to read them in V&B. I prefer to read how Vegeta deals with the bad guys. So good chapter but looking forward to more V&B action in next chapter :) |
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