| "Card Captor Sakura - Altered World" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 18:40 CDT
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OH i love this fic!!! it's so kawaii! Like there's serious stuff every now and then, and funny stuff and cute romantic stuff! Go girl go! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 18:47 CDT
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*sweatdrop* Just realized they put "Secret Hideout" if you don't put anything in the Country box...oy vey where'd they get this stuff? lol
Back to your fic...as usual the chapter is wonderful! You should be so proud of your work! *pats back* I love it! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 18:57 CDT
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God I love my comp...*hugs computer*...it has this automatic thingy so I don't have to write Dee-chan (moongiggles bla bla bla) all the time...and sadly U_U I'm not the amazingly gifted D-chan writer of such fics as I don't have the memory to remember...we just share the same name different spelling...it was a coincidence ppl! Check ff.net anytime it'll say how long I've had this name! no wait ff.net is ON THE FRITZ!!! argh sry I tend to talk too much but now about ur fic..
I like how Li-kun acts...it's actually quite amusing and I've have to say that most of the humor in this story is from him...who woulda thunk it? Mr. Serious turned into Mr. Funny ha lol..anyways I have to say that I'm a lil sad only the TINIEST bit about how Sakura is pictured as this gorgeous, ms. girl that every guy wants and Tomoyo is like sorta shoved into the background. Sakura, Eriol, Li, and Tomoyo are my four fav ccs characters and i think that most of us will agree that Tomoyo is pretty darn pretty too! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:05 CDT
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If your killing urself over this at least in my opinion u won't die for nothing...erm ok maybe that wasn't a good example but your fic is turning out great! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:19 CDT
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This chapter was yet another huge success in my eyes...In some ways i like how you portrayed Tomoyo and in others i don't i like how you said she was like a shield for Sakura but you sort of gave her an ice queen image u know? Kinda like your making her hide her real self like hse's some closed off person or something I guess...but I love your work! It's so...so i dont' know but it's really good!! ^_^...and gomen for talkinga bout Tomoyo so much...i tend to worry too much about the characters that most ppl think to be pushed to the sidelines... |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:25 CDT
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I for one like this fic because of the wonderful writing style and the great way your writing it! ^_^ Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:32 CDT
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I agree Meiling is a great character too even though sometimes I could really hurt her for being so possessive of Li-kun when he belongs to sakura but romances are always so interesting if they're love triangles nay? I think you should add more "original" stuff in your fics you know? your so true to the episodes especially in this chapter...so just try to add YOUR stuff in other wise it's just like watching the episodes over again well sorta except your reading and erm nevermind i'll shuddup now...U_U |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:40 CDT
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Don't worry you definately deserve these reviews I rate this chapter a ten...so sweet esp ethe touya and his g/f hugging can't recall her name now...^_^; |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:49 CDT
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I love this chapter...i give it a Ten...^_^ i don't exactly love the girl either but she's a very interesting and very human character.. |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:56 CDT
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rate this a ten...^_^ esp liked the lil original thing you added when Kero (Li-kun) was being "cradled" by Sakura ahahhaha that was hilarious! fainted...lol...c a lil personal touch can go a long way! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 20:07 CDT
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I love kenshin!!! *cough* right back to ur fic...
^_^ I feel a lil sorry for Meiling right about now...*sigh* I love this fic! You wrote it great! This has to be the best s and s fic i've read so far by far! |
Reviewed By: Piper On: October 21, 2001 01:02 CDT
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SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOO CCCCCCOOOOOLLLLL!!!!!!! I LLOOOOOVVVEEEE YOUR STORIES!!!! OMG! IT'S SSSSSOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! II NNNEEEEDDD SSSWWWEEEAAATTTSSS!!!!!! CANDY!!!! MUST HAVE CANDY!!! |
Reviewed By: Ragna Blade On: November 18, 2001 11:57 CST
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The storyline up to Chapter 2 seems cute and overall looks like you'll summarize the series, but I have no to clue to what is "Hoe." As for '-chan,' I believe you are mistaken. From what I've seen of its usage in the past, '-chan' is more a term of affection and familiarity instead of meaning little (ie. 'nii-chan means older brother.) |
Reviewed By: Ragna Blade On: November 18, 2001 12:19 CST
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When I mentioned "Hoe" earlier I'm refering to Sakura's speech patterns with it. Chapter 3 is also confusing since you have Sakura first greet Li when entering the classroom and he's seated behind her, but the home form(I'm guessing you mean room) teacher introduce Li later seating him behind Sakura because of the availability. I believe you just misplaced the paragraph, but it is still confusing none the less when reading. |
Reviewed By: Ragna Blade On: November 18, 2001 14:15 CST
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Loved Ch 4, funny and cute at the same time. LOL. OMG, Ch 5 & 6 were unbelievable. Li is just too cute for words ^_^. LMAO *panting* I can't believe you just did that to Li in ch 7. Can't really complain since I loved it but still. And thank you for finally bringing in Touya and Yukito/Yue into the picture. Yue would've been my favorite if not for Li. Don't have much to say for Ch 8-10 except good plot development, but not much action except Li's reaction at the end of Ch 10. |
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