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Title: Chpt 32
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: July 02, 2010 00:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
"crazed cereal killer", lol. I can't help imagining someone stabbing a bowl of Cheerios. This was a good chapter though...
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Title: Chpt 26
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 29, 2010 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic has quite a few double personalities... But that just makes them doubly interesting.
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Title: Chpt 24
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 29, 2010 00:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice Quiz. I guess I most display the characteristics of Mahdness (not a comforting thing really). And by the way, thank you for the spacing in this chapter, it's much easier on the eyes (especially at this time at night...or morning). :)
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Title: Chpt 19
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 25, 2010 21:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
My goodness. I feel excited, surprised, sickened and saddened all after reading one chapter. My, my, you're good...
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Title: Chpt 18
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 25, 2010 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Not exactly how I imagined it but, worth discovering nonetheless. It's good to see Kagome taking a stand rather then tearing up all over the place. I'd love to see how this develops...
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Title: dedicated reader
Reviewed By: shadownekko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I hadn't read your story before. I do hope someday you take it over to Dokuga where I normally read. Wonderful story with only complaint is the spacing makes it difficult to read sometimes. Overall I really did love this.
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Title: Chpt 17
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 24, 2010 22:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I know this is a Sess/Kag fic but, somehow this really makes me hate Sesshoumaru. What a chauvinistic asshole. I know he's acting like a man of his times but, geez, I'm almost hoping for a Inu/Kag fic now, or even a Hojo/Kag fic - I don't know. I hope he wises up in up-coming chpts and stops treating Kagome like something underneath his shoe. Don't get me wrong though; I'm still reading this fic. This is way too good to put down. And I hope Kagome smartens up to. If she really is a progressive woman, she shouldn't let Sesshoumaru treat her like a sex object. Maybe if she challenged the male who won the competition to battle her in the end, even if she knew she might lose, it would show everyone that even a woman can have balls (figuratively speaking of course). But maybe I'm speaking too soon. I should keep reading to find out what happens next.
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Title: Chpt 11
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 24, 2010 10:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much drama. Excellent story, excellent chapter...
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Title: Chpt 7
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 24, 2010 00:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chpt. As a side-note, it's a bit overly cautious to add a rape warning in both the header as well as within the story itself; one in the header is more then enough. In-chapter author's notes really break up the flow of any story... But who am I to say so now that the story is complete anyway; just an aside for future reference. I look forward to more when I wake up fresh in the morning. :)
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Title: Chpt 6
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 23:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, maybe one more chpt before bedtime...
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Title: Chpt 5
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 23:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny & nice. Maybe one more chpt before bedtime...
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Title: Chpt 4
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 23:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very exciting chpt, once again.
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Title: chpt 3
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 22:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Your consistent; I like that. I am almost positive that your next chpts will be as good as the last three. I'm really impressed with the storyline and build up so far...
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Title: Chpt 2
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 22:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad this chpt is just as good as the first. I'll enjoy reading this fic...
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Title: Chpt 1
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent first chapter. Really a great joy to read. Each character seems very well developed. I hope this continues for the next chpts...
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