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| "One Half a Wing and a Prayer: Fly me to the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: katsuhito [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2012 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, come on. You can't leave it at just that! Well, I suppose you can, actually, being the author and all. But I was really looking forward to this one. Anyway, the teasing taste you've tortured us with was great. I loved the intro to the senchi (esp. Pluto's last statement - ROFL), as well as keeping up with the R.5 storyline with the addition of Mister, er Miss, umm... Kuonji-san. :) Oh, and that pesky status of "unfinished and extremely short" is the only reason I made the overall rating a 9 instead of a 10. Sigh, I see that you've not written anything, at least on this site, since 2010. I hope that doesn't mean you've retired. If you have, well, I'd be sad to see you leave, and I would hope you'd put at least this fic up for adoption. It may be yet another R.5xSM story, but I don't think I've seen a good one of those with a succubus, psychic, and amazon cat-girl included, not to mention an enemy of the sub-terrestrial kind (to borrow a phrase from BtVS). | Title: BlackRoseFire
Reviewed By: Me 2 On: March 18, 2011 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I really loved the way that you introduced the senshi. | Reviewed By: FanFan On: June 09, 2010 10:16 EDT
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Yay! You fixed the formating issue! To bad the entire chapter's been eaten... Fix it... please?
| Title: avatoa
Reviewed By: avatoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 12:53 EST
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That pretty much covers what I was going to say about the matter. Thank you, Ranma.
| Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 00:25 EST
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There is no first chapter posted, nor has there been for quite some time. The original post was unformatted, when it was there, as well.
| Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! I did a oneshot where Ranma was the reincarnated mother AND father of the time guardian. So, if Ranma's Mommy, who got the instant Nanniichuan? Again. Love the story, even if its taken an omake-like turn. OBTW Genma deserves (an) Enema. ^☺^ ʇɐq ʎǝןıɯs ʎɯ ǝǝs
| Reviewed By: Anon5 On: February 07, 2010 14:51 EST
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---What the fuck?!? Please tell me that this is a case of two mommies (ie, Ranma being the father but staying female enough to equate being a father), because I still can't see this version of Ranma being intimate with a male. Happy writing, and update soon!
| Reviewed By: Apropos On: January 18, 2010 05:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been looking forward to seing this start up again for a good long while. Glad to see it's still kicking, and still excellent. PS: Chapter 1 seems to have vanished into the ether. I hope you can get it back up soon.
| Reviewed By: Anon1 On: January 12, 2010 03:00 EST
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---Still waiting on the next update to this and your other current SM/R Story. Please continue soon!
| Title: And...
Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 01:03 EST
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Genma's a bastard? Check. Scouts except Setsuna are naive? Check. Ranma is a powerful, female sex-demon? Check. Bound lover girls? Check and double check. Okay, so the crossover begins. Okay, so let's see how things will play out with all our new mysteries and the sudden return of an old enemy. I hope you have as much fun writing this as we all have reading it. Also, where do I go to complain about the lack of formatting abilities for the reviews? It would be so much nicer if I could have line breaks or paragraphs, screw all this bold and font size crap. From the offices of AMWOOD co
| Reviewed By: gsteemso [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2009 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most of chapter one is missing. Binary zero (NUL character) in the file, maybe? Anyway, love chapter two. "SHUT UP KUNO!" Awesome. I also noticed you have a lot of mis-words in this chapter (typos that look OK to a spellmangler but should have been caught by a decent copyeditor); that's why I only gave you 8 out of 10 for spelling. Looking forward to Three!
| Reviewed By: wolf40k [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 18:34 EST
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KILL THE EMO, LONG LIVE METAL!!! BEST. LINE. EVER. I'm getting it tattooed. But seriously Great chapter, hopefully the next one comes sooner than this one.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 11:59 EST
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Also, the initial section for chapter 1 is now gone. What's up with that?
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 11:58 EST
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Neh, fuck the metal, WIELD THE POWER OF ROCK! Still, does the eye glow thing mean Setsuna is a succubus too? An interesting twist, to say the least. In any case, awesome update, after all this time, now if only your other story can be updated too. And it's at such a good point, with the lady and the tiger about to go to the brawl, lmao. Continue to update, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Lictre On: December 04, 2009 22:16 EST
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Unfortunately, I have to give this a poor review, since it appears that no formatting made it into the page, as it comes across as a block of text with no paragraphs or other distinguishing controls. Block of text fics border on the entirely unreadable. Please re-examine your formatting and correct things.
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