Title: Short Story Reviewed By:ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2012 20:06 EDT Comment/Review: Yes, I know it's a short, but it was meant to be short. It's a short story being that my time to write is very limited. When I saw the story in my head I thought of it as scenes. So the last chapter cuts into the scene where they're in a hospital. I am currently working on other stories and I need to find some that I've already written and post them up here. But thanks for sending me comments and what not I really enjoying reading them. It lets me know that ppl are still reading fan fics on line :) ldymoon
