| "Unpredictable and Undeniable Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2011 17:12 EST
Comment/Review:
REALLY AWESOME LEMONS with Chi-chi and Vegeta... I can totally believe these actions out of Vegeta, up to the point of marking her. The Prince-of-all-Saiyans would NEVER fall for Chi-chi...just in it for a couple of wham-bam-thank-you-m'am moments, and, then, HE would totally tell Goku about himself! I'm just saiyain...lol |
Title: WTF
Reviewed By: Bulmagurl87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2011 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you really are inventive |
Reviewed By: K-pixy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 18:02 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for reviewing. I am so glad you (Liked) it. It was a pleasure seeing all of your comments. And if you want more of the story, you got it. I won't leave it there.
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Reviewed By: Littlekely [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2010 19:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a probelm. WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING? CHI-CHI AND VEGETA?! I swear, you have an active imagination. Even though you're off your rocker, I really enjoyed it regardless. You had nice detail and you actually pulled off the pairing. (Even though it's still wrong...) I would like to read your stories again and see how creative you can be with other people. Also, the ending was totally messed up. How can you just lop it off like that? I was actually getting... used to the idea that...Chi-Chi and...Veg...never mind. Still, I actually wanted to know what Goku was going to do to her. Or say. Either way, I liked it. (By the way, the person who sent this to you is not the person who reviewed it. It was her friend.) Thanks for the...ride. Crusnik
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2009 16:29 EST
Comment/Review:
strange couple, but nice story. too bad for the abrupt ending though.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2009 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
weird pairing i must say. not the weirdest i have seen though. good story line pretty good lemons. keep it up! its good!
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